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Reviews for Winter's Chill

By : Dante1444
  • From ANON - Peya Luna on December 17, 2010
    ok,for once iīm not commenting about the sex - though it was positively evil from kouga to screw inu like that where he couldnīt move, couldnīt make a sound and had to stay on his cock for hours on end...if not for his demonic healing abilities heīd been sore for days after that marathon session! although, with how often they go at it inuīs probably growing callouses at his opening by now LOL anyway, what i really meant to say is how much i like inu becoming a true member of the pack and enjoying it, one can feel how this is healing his old scars of being mistreated+scorned. though i canīt help but wonder what sess would say if he finds out that the wolfs have basically adopted his hated halfbrother....but what is worse, with how much inu likes living with the pack, will he even wish to leave in the spring and go back to being the odd man out in a human village? and i doubt that kagome would be willing to move into the den where she would be the outsider, plus its too far away from the well aka her family. all in all, i foresee another conflict for the couple (aside from her finding out how exactly they kept warm for the winter) and it makes me wonder if theyīll last in the long turn. btw, did inu mark kagome or just marry her? for i donīt think that kouga could mark him if inu was already in a true youkai-accepted partnership.
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  • From ANON - river girl on December 16, 2010
    Dear Dante,

    I'm feeling some special sympathy for the characters in this story. I'm currently in a not so modern country for a job and the outside temperature if -4 C at the warmest. It may well be lower. The sum that up, I have no heat, at the moment and am doing a fair imitation of Inuyasha hiding in a cave of blankets. In case you were wondering, your facts are right on! It was a special treat running across your story. I felt like I had company. Thank you for writing. I will keep checking back for the next chapters, me and my computer buried deep from the winter freeze.

    I love your character of Kouga. Also, having been through long unheated winters before, the lethargy of the other tribe members is smack on!As well as the halucination when Inuyasha turned human. You're on a role girl, and I love seeing Inuyasha get some good healthy affection! Thank you.

    river girl
    ~river girl
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  • From kougaslover on December 15, 2010
    Hahahahah!!!!!! That was frikking awesome! Kouga is so damn phenomenal in this story, and I love the way you write. I'm dying to know what exactly happened with Ginta and Inuyasha, and I can't wait for what else Kouga has planned. The sex between them was so arousing, and I loved the way Inu felt about having his rival inside him, so beautiful! Great work, and yes, I'm working on them. I have a ton of COA stories, it's just getting to those points, while working, that's the hard part. Still, excellent job, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Vyper on December 15, 2010
    What I want to know is if Inuyasha will want to stay with Koga rather than returning to the village with his wife.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on December 15, 2010
    Very sexy and hot nicely done can't wait for the next update and don't have to much time so have a great holiday and I'll be waiting for more thank you for sharing.
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  • From myperversities on December 15, 2010
    I freaken love this story!!! I hope you have Inu stay with Kouga and not go back to Kagome (god I hate that child). Mmmm, Kouga/Inu soooo yummy, you did a wonderful job on the lemon... just splendid....got me hot beneath the coller that's for sure. Keep up the awesome work because I'll be checking daily for more!! ;)
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on December 15, 2010
    good to see that inu is getting the hang of it -i wonder if kouga is aware that before long heīll be the one getting screwed. with inu, no 'iīm alpha i always top' nonsense is going to work! and with how ginta+hakaku are responding to inu, and since he doesnīt exactly dislike them either....how about a foursome in that shower-cave? just imagine it: a pile of warm, slippery bodies, writhing and grinding against each other...ok, now i need a cold shower! ;-)
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  • From katzeiason on December 15, 2010
    really like it oohoh god can't wait for more to come.
    was wondering if sesshou will be in it, think you sould make it were they cross paths sometime.
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  • From ANON - ladyhoshi on December 15, 2010
    keep up the good work. I really enjoying your story.
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  • From Femaletengu on December 10, 2010
    I few spelling errors here and there. But nothing major and all in all a very very good story. I love it.

    Keep up the good work and look forward to reading more.

    -FemaleTengu-
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  • From Arieru on December 08, 2010
    oooooh I want more please update soon.
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  • From Vyper on December 07, 2010
    It will be interesting to see what Koga has in store for Inuyasha now that he is human.
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  • From ANON - maini on December 07, 2010
    You know it would be really funny if kouga ended up as the bottom. Cause he is all the while trying this alpha-thing

    Besides it would be something different. There are a ton of fic's with Inuyasha suddenly being uke. (which i think would fit the wolf much better)
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  • From kougaslover on December 07, 2010
    Ahh, I love Kouga, that beautiful walking erection. Somehow, giving a distracted Inu a handjob is the most fitting form of contact I could see the wolf giving under the circumstances. Great job on this chapter, I can't wait to read more, and to see how Inuyasha fares as a human. Why do I get the feeling that to survive the coming night, Kouga's going to really step up their intimacy, really have to find a way to put his heat inside Inuyasha to keep him going. Hehe, great work, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - been on December 07, 2010
    I saw a few mistakes, but they were super minor and irrelevant in the grander scheme of things.
    Anyways, point is. Story is tooooooo good to worry about the errors.
    Poor Inu, can't handle all the "culture shock" hahahaha.

    Hope he gets more acquainted with the wolves soon.
    Can't wait to read what you're cooking up. Great work!!!
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