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Reviews for Game of Cat and Mouse

By : sherlock
  • From drcomalfy on December 11, 2010
    OMFG. Best chapter yet. Your Sesshoumaru is fucking hot with how territorial he is regardless of his mistakes but haaaaaa. Hot. I like that Kouga and Inuyasha like each other. I'm also liking that Sesshomaru knows Inuyasha's real name but Kouga doesn't seem to know at all!! AWESOME. Fuck. Please update soon. I'm dying here! AHH!

    GREAT job!

    -DM
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  • From ardentes on December 11, 2010
    Wow! Great chapter! I really enjoyed this chapter. It added a whole lot more to this story. I really enjoyed it. Please write more soon!
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  • From Buumkin on December 08, 2010
    I read this like, four seconds after you posted. But then I was feeling resentful for the whole cliffhanger thing and the whole deal where the chapter ended... And in retrospect that wasn't awesome of me. Because it was a cute chapter. And I'm gonna need to to write more. Also, do you have a Ygal? It's so much easier for me to notice things that I want more of on Ygal...
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  • From jdbbrz27 on December 06, 2010
    Oh wow I just started reading your story and like wow talk about starting out with a bang very cool indeed. Well looks like Sessh stole Inuyasha's cherry but that may be all he's left with if Kouga takes the whole plant or tree or body depending on the case may be. What will Sessh do it's not like he's endeared himself to little sweet Inuyasha so far I mean he's beaten and raped him for doing nothing but trying to help. Now what will Kouga do I wonder this is really sounding like a story I want to continue reading especially as it sounds so far like you have a great imagination so I'll be waiting for your next update with great anticipation. And so far the length of your chapters is fine if it's a great story people will read it no matter the length although I kind of like long ones myself.
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  • From katzeiason on December 06, 2010
    really great!!! yeah i would like to see someone make inu therew wife(hehehe) they will have another thing coming if they do.keep up the long chappie's
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  • From trystkinkou on December 06, 2010
    *bounces happily* yay! update...update.. update!! *singing* i love the nice twist you have setup with Koga. *snickers* ohhh the fun he'll bring but the fact that the korean mafia think silverclaw is female heherhehehehehehehehe... poor poor inuyasha! and no the chapter wasn't too long. as long as it is interesting and riviting to the audience, a chapter is never too long. ^^ please keep teh goodness coming.
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  • From Aalto on December 06, 2010
    Ummm... A little advice with the chapters... 'To long' doesn't exist with fanfic chapters, the longer the better. Just avoid cliffhangers like the one at the end of fourth chapter and you'll do fine.

    You write well and I can hardly wait for more. Merry christmas!
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  • From Nesha85 on December 06, 2010
    Great plot! The longer chapter was great. I dislike short chapter because it such
    a short read. Great idea making Sesshoumaru a mafia boss. Most writers have him a
    businessman. Fun, making everybody think SilverClaw is a female.
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  • From maegerakawaii on December 06, 2010
    I am glad Inuyasha is still as stubborn as ever. He is so ADORABLE that way. HA! Take that Sesshoumaru, someone will now be a constant thorn in your side when it comes to gaining Inuyasha's affections. I love these complications, so please keep the chapters coming.
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  • From Vyper on December 06, 2010
    Well Sesshoumaru has got his work cut out for him. Wooing Inuyasha right now after being so damn mean to him will take more than pretty words. I really feel for Inuyasha and I totally understand if Inuyasha hates Sesshoumaru in this story. He was raped by the guy and beaten almost to death. I would have run away too.
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  • From kmoaton on December 05, 2010
    I was totally surprised at this twist in the story! I can't wait to see how "SilverClaw" reacts to Kouga!! I am really enjoying this so much! I can't wait until you update!!
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  • From kougaslover on December 02, 2010
    I liked this one, I'm kind of surprised there wasn't an outright apology from Sess, but then with Inu that might not have worked that well anyway. Glad to see his mental state is fairly undamaged, I don't really get the stories where he's totally shattered. I know it can happen to anyone, but he's just tough as nails. Great work, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From aryaarsay on December 02, 2010
    nnnnoooooo don't make the next chapter shorter!!!! .... by the way, i absolutely loved this chapter, loved it. awwww sess and inu are soooo cute together. can't wait to see how inu reacts when he's more coherent, and how sess handles it. please write the next chap soon
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  • From Buumkin on December 02, 2010
    Yes. Just yes. Please? Because finals week is coming up and my brain doesn't function without depraved and delicious pr0nz. Which you provide with most excellence.
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  • From Vyper on December 02, 2010
    I think that your chapter should have been longer. Thanks for updating. I really like this story.
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