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Reviews for Evil rising, Litch Queen of the western continent

By : dragondeedee3
  • From kougaslover on April 17, 2011
    First attempt at review didn't go through, so. I really love this story so far, I like the way you have their relationship evolving gradually, and very in character. I just don't see them as overly angsty and emotional, they're warriors, and you did a great job of showing their emotions and feelings while still keeping them the way they really are, excellent work!

    And, the BDSM is phenomenal. Inuyasha's dreams are just incredibly erotic, and somehow very in character for him. He isn't the overly sensitive type, though he does seem eager to please and trust in those he becomes familiar with. At least to me, I see him being the way you have him portrayed, a strong, powerful beta, with a nice masochistic streak to boot. And I like that Sesshomaru seems to know more than he's letting on, with the off-handed humiliating comment, and putting his foot on Inuyasha when they were sparring. He did mention something like hearing Jaken talk in his sleep, perhaps he's heard Inu doing the same?

    Great work on this, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From midnightsweet on April 17, 2011
    that was a nice and funn one
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  • From ajj77sunhawk on April 17, 2011
    lol damn I wanted Inuyasha to have some revenge :) pouts. Just started reading. Good story thanks.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2011

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  • From midnightsweet on April 16, 2011
    will see how this go's
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  • From Vyper on April 16, 2011
    I love the second chapter. It seems like Inuyasha isn't the only one who likes the battle and that erotic dream was pretty interesting. Perhaps Sesshoumaru will eventually endulge in some kinky stuff with his little brother.
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  • From Vyper on April 15, 2011
    This story is interesting so far. I look forward to the next update.
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