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Reviews for A Kiss To Build A Dream On

By : cakeiton
  • From ANON - Franrie on December 11, 2016

    Such a gorgeous writing style and what a beautiful story! Thank you so very much for sharing it with us! Hugs


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  • From Vyper on September 03, 2011
    I love this story, especially the end. It is so romantic and Sesshoumaru is such a damn hottie. I love him.
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  • From Vyper on July 27, 2011
    I like the line "on a big doggie cloud". Very cute. It was a nice chapter.
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  • From Vyper on July 26, 2011
    The love scenes are so hot in this story. Sesshoumaru truly is insatiable with his appitite for sex with Kagome. I love it.
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  • From Vyper on July 25, 2011
    I like that he is smiling this time. It seems Sesshoumaru might actually have a plan in mind for Kagome and that is always hopeful.
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  • From Vyper on July 24, 2011
    I hope Sesshoumaru plans on making Kagome his mate. He seems to be heading that direction.
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  • From Vyper on July 22, 2011
    I love that he is showing her he loves her, but I hope he will say it sometime soon unless this is the end. I hope it is not. I would love to see them married.
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  • From Vyper on July 19, 2011
    Awe, Sesshoumaru is falling in love and he is afraid of it. I hope he gets over it soon and grows up a bit. Geez it isn't like he is getting any younger. He should take a good thing and run with it while he still can.
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  • From Vyper on July 19, 2011
    The last chapter was almost romantic. I can almost hear violins in the background playing along with the jazzy tune.
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  • From Vyper on July 19, 2011
    I think I liked the second chapter better than the first. It was hot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2011
    Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

    Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097

    Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

    Thank you for your cooperation.

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  • From Vyper on July 18, 2011
    This is pretty good, but I was kind of hoping for more of a lemon. That is ok though since it is a cute story so far.
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