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By : Smitteeness
  • From lara5170 on August 09, 2011
    This was good & I was about to tell someone how I don't think I can see Naraku with anyone but,Kagura or undead Kikyo in her drywall body.It's because I hate bugs,they terrify me & I picture him as a spider or bug demon.It gives me the heebie jeebees but,I liked this one.I wondered,how long the 3 had been together? I don't want to see Kagome get old & die after risking so much.She did a damn honorable thing for a kid,most would've run,gone home &/or sealed the well.I hope you write more of this. I don't know what it is about Sessh & Kagome but they are my favorite FF pairing for Inu FF. I read an eng version of a light novel for the series & it made all the odd things about Kagome stick out & they make her seem like more than human. The Jewel with its power(made of both miko & youkai powers) in her body since before birth,being born with a symbol glowing on her chest,a well that's a time portal & in story when they show souls they are all little white puffs but,Kagomes is HUGE,even after Kikyo had a piece of it,Kagome got attacked by that soul sucking mirror & her soul was so huge,it was like bigger than her own body & then when just part of it got sucked in,it broke the mirror & freed all the souls,then it turned out...wait,I can't say anymore unless you ask me,just in case you don't know how it ended,I'm not saying it....but please write more of this story or just more FF. If you could get me to see Naraku as anything more than a bug guy,I gotta read more...
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  • From Vyper on July 26, 2011
    I liked this oneshot. This would have made a nice story, but I would have prefered it be Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru with Kagome rather than Naraku. It was different though.
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