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Reviews for When it rains, it pours.

By : MidnightRain
  • From Vyper on January 04, 2012
    I want this one to be a story. It is so very good and I want to find out Inuyasha's POV.
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  • From missiemae on November 18, 2011
    First story, pretty freakin' amazing! I felt the power, the heat, un-contained lust. It is so good. Hope to read more from you soon!
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  • From Vyper on September 29, 2011
    I love this story. It is so sucky though that it is over. I really wanted more. The sex scene was so hot that it made me feel kind of sad there isn't real men out there that can do what Inuyasha and his big brother, my boyfriend, Sesshoumaru can do. I seriously have to find both sexy brothers out there someday.
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  • From BlueDragon on September 18, 2011
    I just read SplendentGoddess's review and wanted to let you know that I'm in complete agreement with her, lol.
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  • From BlueDragon on September 18, 2011
    Great job! I thought the two Enigma tracks were perfect for the mood of your story. Wish there was more! It's very intriguing! The story, I thought, flowed very well and I didn't notice any grammatical or punctuation errors. I'm notoriously able to spot them and get distracted. So, it was nice to see something that was well put together. It's too bad it's only a oneshot. I could see at least one more chp out of this ;-) Again, great job and thanks for sharing with us your first story.
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  • From SplendentGoddess on September 12, 2011
    This was really good, although personally I'm a sucker for porn with plot and while a LOT of people (especially on this particular website) can read steamy hot smut and be completely satisfied, there's a part of me that just has to know the story that goes along with it. I would love to see a companion piece, just a chapter two, that recaps things from Inuyasha's POV. The way we're left off...while your writing was great and the sex was really great, I'm confused regarding their relationship, why they ended it in the first place if they're obviously still so hot for each other. Instead of rewriting everything that you just did, you could show perhaps Inuyasha's side of things as he first gets Kagome's call, the thoughts that went through his head, how he convinced himself to go over to her apartment, what he had been planning on saying/asking and how those thoughts went out of his head when he saw her. Then if you wanted to you could skim over the details of the sex against the wall since we already saw that and perhaps cut to the next morning, and them talking things out and (most likely) deciding to officially get back together again - of course with perhaps another, different round of hot sex *wink*. This is all just a suggestion, of course, based on my own personal desire to get into the story and characters' lives, even if it's only a one-shot, but I think you definitely did a good job with what you wrote. You did such a good job that I want to see and learn more! LOL, so awesome work! Even if you don't continue on with this particular universe, you definitely need to write more just generally speaking.
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