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Reviews for Undenied

By : TheHatterTheory
  • From ANON - ChaoticPsyche on February 22, 2013
    This was a lot better than I had thought it was going to be, and wow!
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  • From HeavyMist on January 27, 2013
    I am a Harry Potter fandom reader, and writer, but your summery intrigued me, so i decided to read, I DON'T regret it.
    wonderfully written, deep, intense, and touching.
    I loved it !! It is not stilted, or awkward. it flows unhidered, it trickles and meanders to where you wanted to lead, smoothly.
    I liked especially how you captured her state of mind, before,during and after their sessions.
    Kudos, Great job indeed, especially that sado- masochism is not an easy subject matter to write. Not at all.
    you have captured the intricate specifics, yet also uncovered the beauty and harmony that such couples could find,
    with one another.
    thank you for sharing.
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  • From CreatureofShadow on April 04, 2012
    ALRIGHT!! I've had to rewrite this 4 times! Bc it keeps not accepting it for some reason >_> I think it's prolly me being lame with the captcha but I'm going to pretend reviews just hate me. ANYWAYS!! Every time I think of these two with this sort of kink, or see stories where it's involved, Sesshomaru is the maso and Kagome the sadist. So this was a new one for me. See? I still had ONE fanfic cherry left. XD I liked this though. Keep up the awesome!
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  • From BlueBananas on March 26, 2012
    Wow.. Bravo Bravo! This was a ridiculously good read. What a beautiful D/S S/M fic. ;)
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  • From Plumeriamoon on March 24, 2012
    Your writing is exquisite. I take this story for what it is. Two people finding love and bonding through pain. I am not one who draws pleasure from recieveing or inflicting pain, but I do know the trust , training and self control it requires.
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  • From bloodshound on March 23, 2012
    kinky indeed. yeah for kags, in coming to accept her needs and yay for seshi for being able to fill those needs.
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  • From botticelliangel on March 22, 2012
    Good ideas. It was a little hard to read because the text was so small, also I found it difficult to remember whose perspective you were writing from because it seemed to switch a lot (not in the dialoge, that was fine). Interesting. Happy Writing
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