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By : botticelliangel

From ANON - pumpkinpi on February 02, 2013
All of them are horrified by the attack but was smart enough to see though it! Not only did he attack the group but he's trying to worm his way under Inukimi in more ways than one. But I wonder if she has another agenda besides "saving" sesshoumaru from the bond he has with his brother. If they find out she was involved, no telling what may happen, although Sesshoumaru may have already begin to suspect her involvement. He knows she is against their union has easy access to the meido and has a weird complicated way of getting things done! Wonder what she really wants from Sesshoumaru. Great stuff look forward to more!!!
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From ANON - pumpkinpi on February 02, 2013
The tree youkai, always the wise counselor! At least now the four of them know exactly what's going on and what would happen if they decided to break up the bond! Rin more accepting, but after seeing The two brother's reaction in hearing what the tree had to say, I wonder how she will react. Great stuff look forward to more!!!
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From ANON - pumpkinpi on February 01, 2013
Wow talk about complicated relationships, the bond between the four of them, the pain, regret and guilt they suffer and the misunderstandings seems to aim to tear them apart and bring them closer together at the same time! Great stuff look forward to more!!!
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From ANON - pumpkinpi on February 01, 2013
Lots of revelations that Inuyasha probably wasn't expecting. Ironic that Sesshoumaru would be cursed by a blessing.can't help but wonder if that was one of the reasons why he abandon Inuyasha, not so much because he was a hanyou or because he was being attacked by youkai constantly but because he thought one day Inuyasha may attempt to do the same to him... Great stuff look forward to more
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From ANON - pumpkinpi on February 01, 2013
Hehehe, It cute how they bicker like an old married couple. And I love the way Rin puts Sesshoumaru in his place when he's acting up:-) She has him wrapped around her little finger. Wonder how Rin would react if she found out what type of activities Sesshoumaru has been doing with his brother, or does she already know. Great chapter, look forward to he next one
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From username-classified on January 18, 2013
In an homage to your last chapter�I decided to steal my neighbors toaster oven to make the tasty croissants. I wonder if his house will fill with the pleasant aroma. If toasters are anything like arms, and my maid says they are, then yes. I can only imagine what kinds of strange things that guy will say as he wanders around his house looking for the baked goods that aren�t there. I decided to watch the inuyasha dvds, the stolen toaster now sitting where it�s novelty brethren once stood. I�ll be honest, I wasn�t expecting the shockingly low amount of bromance in the series. Truthfully I�m suprized I even looked for it�but, your story set my expectation for the anime. I had a realization�couldn�t Miroku just pretend to betray the group and side with Naraku. Think about it�all he has to do is help Naraku gather the shikon jewl, and when it�s all gathered just be like �alright�high-five!��bam! problem solved�no more Naraku. Anime aside...i�m interested to see Kikiyo handles traveling with the group. Poor Kagome.
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From Vyper on December 09, 2012
I hope Sesshoumaru saves the little fox. This story is so good too. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Raven on December 07, 2012
I�ve really enjoyed reading your story here at AFF and while I�m sad to hear it will be coming to a close, I�m looking forward to seeing what will happen next.

In regards to Sesshomaru�s curse, I�m still not clear on Touga and Inukimi�s role in it all. Was Touga trying to protect Sesshomaru from other youkai forcing themselves onto Sesshomaru, or was he just another victim to the curse? As for Sesshomaru�s mother, I have no idea what her deal is; hopefully you�ll be able to clear everything up soon.

Are Sesshomaru and Inuyasha mates now? I thought Sesshomaru would have to mark Inuyasha in return for that to happen. Another question I have is whether you plan to include Sesshomaru�s coming of age into the story; I know Sesshomaru regrows his arm and gains a new sword, I�m just curious if you�ll include that in your story. In any case, I can�t wait to see what happens next.
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From username-classified on December 06, 2012
Being that I had forgotten that I�m a lightweight when it comes to drinking; my previously mentioned plan to become familiar with the Inuyasha series didn�t go as planned. After downing one redbull/vodka I managed to open the amazon box and place the dvd�s in my toaster and then watch adult swim on cartoon network. I apparently did this for 12 hours.
Unfortunately I�ll be having another copy of the Inuyasha show shipped via amazon. It would seem that during this time my maid felt the need to swap out the dvd�s after each toast cycle. I truly regret ever buying that novelty �dvd player� toaster and most of all..keeping it in my living room.
�Get this great dvd toaster� my brother said. �you can have toast when you watch movies� he said.
Aparently, just because the guys an engineer, he thinks he knows interior decorating. Granted, eating toast while watching movies is a curse that runs in my family. It�s like that bobo tree curse; the one that nobody talks about because they might die or something.
Needless to say Helga thought it was a dvd player too and after each toast cycle she popped in another dvd. This time I�ve decided not to pay for overnight shipping. For my next viewing attempt I�ll leave out the vodka and just settle for redbull and croissants. In the meantime, I did some more reading of your story. I find it interesting that myoga and Inukimi only seem conserend with Sesshomaru�s well being. I wonder how or if Kagome will find out about the nature said bobo tree cruse (the sesshomaru one�not the eating toast while watching movies one).

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From username-classified on November 12, 2012
I�m not sure what�s more entertaining to read; the story or rantings of your hetrophobic fans. I can�t say that this is my normal genre�actually I�m quite sure that it�s not; but my maid likes to read this kind of stuff when she get�s drunk�and she�s been drinking on the job again. For some reason she just can�t read to herself. Ever meet those people who just have to read everything out loud? That�s her. In any case, her drunken readings has brought forth your fanfics to my attention. I enjoy how the characters just don�t ignore their social and political responsibilities. From what I gather, other fanfic authors will have the characters drop their entire lives after just a little buttplay (it can�t always be like college) I�ve just placed an order for overnight shipping of the Inuyasha dvd collection, and some nice cotton socks (but that�s unrelated). With any luck, watching the dvd collection in one sitting while enjoying redbull, vodka and croissants will give me a better appreciation of your work.
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From ANON - midnightsscream on November 12, 2012
oh thank goodness Inuyasha listened. I was extremely worried. Huh. I'm not use to the mother being the enemy and I don't think I like it at all. Hopefully they'll manage to keep it together. :D great job!
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From ANON - Midnightsscream on November 03, 2012
I haven't read your updates in forever and wow have I missed out. I wasn't such a big fan of all the pairings at first, but you really do make them work quite well and pull the story together. Poor Sesshomaru, he's quite broken in this story, but it works and is so well written. great job and can't wait for your next update!!!!!!!
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From Vyper on November 03, 2012
Right now I don't like Sesshoumaru's Mother very much. She is a mean spirited bitch and I want Naraku dead. I also feel bad for Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. It is obvious they love each other and belong together.
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From ANON - Rayne on November 01, 2012
Absolutely brilliant. The way you portray each character and the emotions/feelings the are experiencing is truly awe inspiring.
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From ANON - Snow on October 31, 2012
Very nice. I'm loving where this is going and I can;t wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I love that there are multiple plots taking place so smoothly. Can't wait until the next chapter!

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