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By : Yashahime
  • From YaoiSmutMaster on March 26, 2019

    Awesome! I loved the way the story was told with added humor. Great story!


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  • From ramblingrobin on January 16, 2018

    I really liked this chapter. Yum. Xoxo Robin


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on December 30, 2017

    Bravo!!!!!! BRAVOOOO!!!!!! *gives standing ovation!!! Thank you!!! Beautifully written! Beautifully executed!!!! A+++++ perfect!!!


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on December 29, 2017

    DaaaaaaaMn!!!! This chapter was BADD AZZ!!! Action PACKED!! AWESOME WORK!!! Dude I was seriously on the literal edge of my SEAT! Just incredibly awesome job!!! Love it lovvve it!!!

     (★^O^★)  whoooo!!! ありがとございます ~or~ Thank you so very much!!!


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on December 29, 2017

    Beautiful!! Of course life always has the most screwd up ways when it brings our inner strengths forward... Messed up shit that stirs our natural gifts to the surface...


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on December 28, 2017

    OooooUuuuuu!!!! かえあいい soooo kawaii!!!  (★^O^★)


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on December 28, 2017

    Stubborn ass Inuyasha!! Lol poor thing... It really isn't his fault though. It's all just so complicated


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on December 28, 2017

    Mmmmmm that was so YUMMY!!! ありがとございます


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  • From MaDDeRHaTTeR on December 28, 2017

    Ahhhh mí gaaaaaad!!!!  (=^-ω-^=) Oooh I hope this one is a winnerrr!!! It already has *Winner plot*  DARE I Hope for a winners dedication???


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  • From ANON - Rose on February 23, 2016
    I enjoyed the story. What I don't understand is how Inuyasha can be the perfect breeder/carrier but not be able to nurse the pups. That's not something that happens in nature, if it were they'd die.
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  • From ANON - Madame on April 13, 2015
    I have only one suggestion, and that is that you remove the word "just" almost everywhere you use it. It creates a very informal tone with your writing that I think would be greatly improved simply by making that modification. It's fine when a character who speaks informally (like Inuyasha) uses it in speech, but
    It really shouldn't be anywhere else in text ( at least not the way you're using it). For example: -It just made him lose control.- the word just isn't necessary and makes it sound very informal. You can however use it as a modifier in some situations like : "There was just barely enough light to make out his face"
    Other than that it was nice :)
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  • From jdbbrz27 on June 23, 2012
    This was a wonderful story thank you so much for writing it. I loved how the two got together and in the beginning with Inuyasha running away from the leches of demons after his ass. I also enjoyed the fight scene with the bitch and Inuyasha popping out babies to and fro and still trying to defend them that's Inuyasha the sweetheart fighter. And the ending when you included Kouga and how jealous Sessh got that was priceless especially when Sessh's mom said that bit about Kouga and Inuyasha getting together if it hadn't been for Ayame that would probably be so true. Sessh actually does have something to be jealous of so adorable. The best part was when Inuyasha was due and threatened the healer and then Sessh with his balls now that was hilarious I laughed through that whole bit. Thank you so much keep up the good work.
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  • From AzaleaBlossom on June 07, 2012
    I really liked this story. Wish there was more detail at some parts, but otherwise I enjoyed it.
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  • From Clio1111 on June 07, 2012
    WHAT A GREAT STORY! LOVED IT. Great job.
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  • From Madamdragon on June 06, 2012
    Good story. Loved it. Sad that it's over but I am sure you will post many more awesome lemony inu/sess fics. I wait patiently for them.
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