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Reviews for Black Silk

By : LadyxxNefertiti
  • From bertabee1 on December 12, 2014
    Good as always looking forward to the seaqual.
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  • From bertabee1 on December 08, 2014
    Really this story is so good please don't abandon it. Your writing is good and fast griping.
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  • From lara5170 on June 07, 2014
    I tried to read this at 1st but was confused when in the 1st chapter, while Kagome was being attacked by Inu, said she wished she had her miko powers so she could fight Inu back & then when Sessh appeared in the next chapter, Kagome told him she wanted to purify him. Then in later chapters it talks of Kagome as a miko. So, what did it mean in the 1st chapter when Kagome said she didn't have miko powers? I stopped reading it for a while when I couldn't make sense of what was going on. Now I tried to read it again but there are still many parts that don't make sense.
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  • From ANON - Kristin on November 09, 2012
    This is a great story. I really like the secretiveness of the bad guys, and us not even kowing their names. I wonder where Haru and the other person were, they should've been there. Inuyasha is acting weird, I wonder if someone did something to him to make him a scapegoat in their plans? I think this is a very well written fic and I can't wait for more! Keep up the great writing!
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  • From Danyealle on September 19, 2012
    Very well written overall with great descriptions and just enough detail for it to be wonderful. There are a couple of things, though, I would like to point out.

    Using things like flashback, places to do a line break and such disrupts the flow of the story and pulls you out of the flow when engrossed, making it harder to get back into it. In fact, such things are a huge complaint of readers (there is even a thread on the forum here on AFF complaining about that very thing). Simple line breaks for scene changes with some well placed words to show that the scene has changed places or italics for flashback sequences are more than enough to let a reader know what has changed and what is doing what. It makes it far easier and more enjoyable for a reader to stay involved if you do such a thing.

    Overall, great job and good visuals! Good work!
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