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Reviews for Elevator Surprise

By : Yashahime
  • From ANON - kristig on February 06, 2013
    Excellent story!!! Always love a story with Kouga and Sesshafter Inu.
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  • From ANON - YuiNoTenshi on August 28, 2012
    When I read, "Bright icy blue eyes" .... I screamed out, "Sesshomaru done killed that baby and beat InuYasha half to death!!"

    I couldn't even finish reading after that part, I had to come and review. It was THAT surprising and THAT serious.

    * Goes back to finish reading the chapter *

    Oh! Great story, by the way! :)
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  • From serialcabbit78 on July 26, 2012
    I love this story, and I love how Sesshoumaru accepted the baby with little protest. It shows that deep down he truly is an honorable person.
    (oh and it's raise not race)

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  • From ANON - Nikkie23534 on July 25, 2012
    I loved this. It was wicked, and it was kind of fun to see Kouga getting the upper hand on Sesshomaru for a minute. But, in the long run, he did lose. No matter how he feels, no matter that he was the first to get Inu pregnant. He was still passed over for Sesshomaru. He was still the one that was left behind. No matter what he is and will always be an outsider. Even to his own daugther.

    It was a great story I really enjoyed it.
    B reading U!
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  • From Vyper on July 24, 2012
    I love this addition to this story. I think Sesshoumaru is the perfect Father and I don't want that ruined by Kouga. Sesshoumaru will always love his little girl and in some ways I hope Kouga gets his ass kicked.
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  • From isabel88 on July 24, 2012
    yes...really good story. i enjoyed it. just one thing; if you know that Aniki means Older brother and Otouto means Younger brother, then why did you still have Sesshomaru call InuYash Aniki? other than that, good story
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  • From ANON - addiena saffir on July 23, 2012
    I think that having her be kouga's was just a bit vindictive to all three of them. Seems they are all being punished. kinda of sucks if you ask me. But other than that good little story.
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  • From ANON - tritetrash106 on July 20, 2012
    Hilarious and very very sexy. If you were to make a one shot series it would be a total hit!!! I can't help but to want more, this was absolutely fantastic!
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  • From ANON - Kyr on July 20, 2012
    I loved it!! ^^
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  • From ajj77sunhawk on July 19, 2012
    great story... err one thing Im not 100% sure but I think Aniki means older bro, Outoto is younger. Thanks for writing
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  • From lunamist on July 19, 2012
    Ohh, I like it very much. Sesshomaru was his normal evil bastard of a self and yet I'm still happy he got his puppy in the end. I think I'm a bit of a masochist when it comes to poor Inuyasha. Anyways, it was a very enjoyable read and thanks so much for both writing and sharing it with all us other delinquents :-)

    lunamist
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  • From Vyper on July 19, 2012
    I love this story! It is so hot and so great. I could just see Kouga's reaction. I would love to see a sequil to this since I would love to have Inuyasha's reaction plus another round with his big brother.
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  • From ANON - Dawn chase on July 19, 2012
    I feel bad for Kouga. Inuyasha is going to chew Sesshomaru's ass out. Lol and Inuyasha is going to have to get used to being Sesshomaru's mate poor Inuyasha
    And I think aniki means big brother and otouto means younger brother
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  • From ANON - msainsane on July 19, 2012
    That was awesome. great story.

    I really like the end in where you hint at Kouga and sesshoumaru in a race to get inuyasha.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - harpergunbunny on July 19, 2012
    Lol. Ok that was pretty hot.

    My only suggestion is for one style change: "aaaaa *moans* aaa. " just doesnt do it for me. I like sexy noise just as much as the next smut lover, and i think you can style it better in the writing without putting ** in there.

    Just for flow purposes, but still fucking hot ;)
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