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Reviews for Bite Back

By : Yashahime
  • From ANON - Doris on October 02, 2016

    Loved your story! Thanks for sharing!!


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  • From ANON - arifu on October 09, 2015
    i adore you.. XD.. you know, you are the few authors that actually finished every stories you've made,like each one of them.. oh i wish you write more of sessinu mpreg.. since its always awesome.. im not a fan of inusess but cos you made inu the uke and pregnant then i can handle it..XD.. do you have ffnet account? since i want to followed and fav you as author and get alerts for your stories to come..XD..pls write more if you dont mind.. thanks for writing
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  • From ANON - Loveless on June 06, 2015
    Wow that was just amazing thank u for the great story, I loved it.XD oh n tell me when u update OK thank
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  • From ANON - Loveless on June 06, 2015
    Wow that was just amazing thank u for the great story, I loved it.XD
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  • From BlackLace on December 11, 2013
    I found your story so far is so awesome and I can't wait to read more in the future!
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  • From Kit-kit on April 27, 2013
    Awesome chapter. Im glad sesshomaru didn't tell kagome off. Inuyasha did love her.
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  • From ANON - Tee on April 21, 2013
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T LISTEN TO Lord Youko WE LOVE LOVE LOVE AND ANYONE WHO DOESN'T LIKE IT CAN KISS YOUR ASS!
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  • From Kit-kit on April 21, 2013
    Aaww how wonderful. A cute lil boy with inuyasha ears
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  • From Arbutus1226 on April 21, 2013
    from the first moment i read about emily i know she would be like sesshy
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  • From LordYouko on April 21, 2013
    I didn't say you are a bad writer. I wouldn't have bothered to read and review this far if I had thought that. You were happily accepting everything else I understood from your story as long as they were complimentary things but when it's something negative, you can't stand it?

    If you are only looking for praise in reviews, I can't do that. I'm a writer too and I've found my writing improved by the reviews and criticisms I've got. I've never yet taken offence to anything a reviewer has said about my writing.

    Best of luck with your writing in the future.
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  • From arianauchiha23451 on April 20, 2013
    that chapter was good... i am happy that inuyasha and touga made it through the birth.... keep up the good work and update when you can
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  • From jdbbrz27 on April 20, 2013
    Aw won't we get to watch as they bring up these two imps and everything especially little Touga and is Sessh's momma gonna see them it sounds so adorably cute. I gotta admit I always find it kind of strange how so many stories have Inuyasha give birth it just seems weird to me I mean so many of them don't have him give birth from the same place as he got pregnant in like girls just because it's their bum although I personally don't see what the big deal is girl's give birth where they go to the bathroom so what's the big deal just can't figure it out. Instead they have him literally cut open now to me that actually doesn't make any sense because there is no point in making someone have babies if they can't come out naturally and cutting one self open or having someone else do it that isn't naturally. I mean he is a demon if he can have babies then it makes sense that it's not exactly like a females anyway right. Grant you the worst is when they turn him into a girl that is just silly I mean to completely change your gender it's one thing to change the hair,nails,ears and senses once a month but to change him from who he is to a girl that's when I tend to stop reading. Oh sorry I think I just started blabbering and forgot to stop. Anyway I loved little Touga and his big sister's reactions to him so adorable. I'll be waiting to see what else happens
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  • From Teneka on April 17, 2013
    I love Shippou in this story. He is a fun carefree playboy just the way I picture him to be as an adult. Love it all!
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  • From Kit-kit on April 14, 2013
    Love the chapter. Im happy that kanji has found someone he can be himself with in shippou. Good job bringing him into the picture. I love to read how other authors portray him as a adult. Great job..i can see him being a playboy..lol. im glad sesshomaru picked emily as heir...girl power afterall plus she is a copy of him. Sesshomaru and inuyasha relationship can be so confusing at times but what i see is that inuyasha can't forget the past and how he was treated by sesshomaru and sesshomaru ofcourse still can't express himself. These two have alot of problem but im sure they will work it out and find happiness together
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  • From LordYouko on April 14, 2013
    I hope you won't be offended to hear this but this was not well written. You have really innovative ideas in terms of the plot but you don't know how to put it across in a story. You tell your readers through the narrative point of view that this character is feeling so and so, instead of showing it. The characters' don't behave like real people who have to meet the future instead of already knowing what it is right from the beginning and enacting a drama to meet an inevitable destiny (in this case, everyone finding love and living happily ever after). This is beginning to read like Fifty Shades of Grey.
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