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Reviews for Ultimate Plan

By : Jenihime
  • From ANON - Kristin on April 29, 2013
    Wow what an amazing second chapter. I can't believe everything that is already happening and develoing. Awesome writing and so easy to read, it flows very well. I just wanted to keep reading, but alas the end of the chapter came and at a good part too. Only a couple of very small erorrs or typos. Good job figuring out the formatting on the site, I have heard of other writers having the same or similar issues, it just made it that much easier to read.
    You have captured the characters well and we are only two chapters in. I am excited to see the development between Sesshomaru and Kagome, and the reactions of her remaining friends/allies, to what has transpired. Keep up the great writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - anon on April 22, 2013
    I like it :)
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  • From ANON - Kristin on April 15, 2013
    Wow this is a really great start. I love the twist already and the plot so far. I agree that spacing the paragraphs would make it easier to read. Other than that it was a really great read and flowed well, with only a few errors. Great work, I can't wait to find out what happens next and into the meat of the story.
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  • From ANON - Review1 on April 15, 2013
    A most interesting start. The paragraphs need to be spaced out a little to make it easier to read. Most of the chapter was rather smooth; though a beta reader could tidy up a little it might not be necessary as it was not too difficult to read.

    Am interested to see your later chapters particularly the reason why 'Inuyasha' was able to use his sword seeing that he does not have blood relations with Inu Taisho.

    It is nice to see the story touch lightly on the mention of the other Elder demons but not go into too much detail as it would drive the focus away from the primary storyline which is Naraku's plot and Sesshoumaru's current situation along with Kagome.
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