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Reviews for Five Days Sequel

By : Saranwyn
  • From AFFModerator on October 29, 2013

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.


    What happens if the disclaimer isn't fixed? We allow seven (7) days for the story to be corrected. After that, we hide it, and it will stay hidden until it's corrected or until it's been thirty (30) days since we hid it. At that point, we do delete the story. If we do hide your story, you can always access it through your Control Panel in your archive profile even while it's hidden. If we do hide your story, and you've fixed it, you can contact the ToS team with the name of your story, your username and the fandom where the story is located to have your story made visible again. You can contact us by email at TOS_team@adult-fanfiction.org. Just one thing: Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately with no additional warning given.


    Here's a link to the Terms of Service:

    http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/tos.php


    This link is to the FAQ about disclaimers, with some examples:

    http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php?showtopic=3560


    We also suggest taking a few minutes to read the Content Guidelines:

    http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/guidelines.php


    You can remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.


    Thank you,

    BronxWench, AFF Archive Moderator


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  • From ANON - jennipea on October 26, 2013
    I really enjoy this series, but I did want to point out one thing: placing parenthetical Author's Notes within the actual text of your story is the writing equivalent of talking loudly during a movie. It distracts readers from the story and some may find it irritating.

    Author's Notes should be posted before the start of the chapter or at the end of the chapter. If you feel that you need to make sure that your readers know which specific passage is being referenced in your note, then you can make use of asterisks or superscripted numbers to correspond with sections of your Author's Note.


    Anyway, carry on.

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  • From nchsmi on October 22, 2013
    AWESOME!!!! I'm so happy that you posted your stories here! I love the freedom of this site! You can be as nasty and dirty as we want! (lol= ;3)

    It's been fun reading these stories again!

    B reading U!
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