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Reviews for The Pain of Loss & Love

By : MikoSayuri
  • From GrimLyght on May 28, 2014
    Well. Firstly, I am enjoying the character portrayals here. Ryuu and Sess's friendship is edgy and comical. I like it. They remind me of two people who tolerate each other, but will most likely fight if they annoy each other. Nice touch there. Great dynamics. The father is also great. I like his character. He wishes for his family to love each other without the prejudice and rivalry. Hopefully his wish comes true. Now, for some reason I feel like Ryuu will work greatly with Kikyo. Something about his personality balances hers. Where she reminds me of a more calm, and mature female version of Sesshomaru. Ryuu has a friendship with him, he might also work out for Kikyo in a different more, personal way too. Course, that's just my thinking right now. I'm curious if the woman he does love though is Sesshomaru's intended? That would be interesting in itself. And possibly Kaori will make some troubles later on between Ryuu and whoever he gets with? Maybe? Anyway, all in all, great chapters! Really digging the story hun! Can't wait for more! :)
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  • From GrimLyght on April 04, 2014
    This is really amazing so far. I love the while setting. Also, the emotions were quite beautiful and felt. I feel for Kikyo though. She reminds me of a softer version of Sesshomaru. Not a bad thing either, she just shows herself as someone strong and free, but jailed and isolated. I hope she gets a happy ending though. The relationship also between the families are also really great. I like that there is struggle, even if hidden, and envy. It makes it realistic, because in the end - when it really matters - family will put that all aside and be there for one another. I can't wait till another chapter! Really amazing work!
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