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Reviews for Consequences

By : valkyrie136
  • From ANON - ..... on August 31, 2020

    This is a whole no! No!!


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  • From ANON - A READER on March 13, 2018

    One of my favorite lemons till this day, I read it almost every month.


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  • From ANON - Aquarius Dragon on October 10, 2016

    Brilliant. Loved every bit of it. You made many typographical errors, but it isn't something that cannot be overlooked for that flow. This is how I imagine a demon's relationship with a girl. It's stupid how idiotic fangirls like fluff-pieces out of this.

    The erotic undertones were amazing. I would have loved for you to write more on this rather than shorten the chapters. Create more chapters where Sesshomaru would simply go near her on a whim, simply because he was lusty. That would have been even more brilliant. It would have been very in character (IC) for a cold and detached Dog-Demon as well.

    What I loved about this is that you kept his personality intact. Most female writers (and sadly, lame fluff writers are always women) turn this guy into a fluff-hogging tool that seems like something out of a romantic cartoon rather than the demon we know from Inuyasha. 

    Again, really felt bad that you didn't delve into this more (there were a couple of grammatical errors as well), but, for all it was worth, this was one of a kind, honest piece. 

    Wish you luck in your future endeavours.

    Regards, AD from ff.net.


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  • From ANON - BeautyIsTheBeast on June 11, 2016
    DUDE, man. That was amazing, you have some typos. But that was great. You gotta teach me. I try writing but I just can't, not in the way that you do. It just flows so well. Omg, it made me so wet, which, that's another compliment. I understand that some view it as sick, I get that, but it's helped me find a way to see the good things in my own childhood trauma. It's hard to explain, but to sum it up, my father was a sick man. Not full on sick, but he bordered what was deemed legal and moral to me....
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  • From ANON - Josie on June 08, 2016
    I bumped on your story by accident today, and I am glad I did! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. You were in character the entire time, and it did not distract me. I hate it when characters personalities are changed and Sesshomaru remained cold and delightful as he has always been. Good job. :)
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  • From ANON - jam2 on April 14, 2016
    hi! please just let me say this, why??? just why? (sigh) I love sesshomaru, so why? it's hurting me actually,(sorry for overreacting) but... but I can't stop reading. (sigh) I'm twisted. well thank you though, this is the first dark lemon I've ever read about S&R so... :)
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  • From ANON - Holli on February 21, 2016
    I read and loved this story. I hope to read more storied like this from you :D
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  • From FireCats20 on August 07, 2015
    I love the dark fics like this. Sesshomaru is my favorite character and this sounds like him I'm my opinion. I can't wait to read more. Is Rin going to get taken and Sesshomaru come to save her? It would be cool if something happens and like in the show all she does is say his name and he's with her. I love their relationship and you see just how much he loves her even though he never comes right out and says it (in the show). Maybe you could let him tell her just how much he loves her and isn't punishing her for something.
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  • From ANON - Rachel on April 08, 2015
    very intriguing thus far..any plans on continuing?
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  • From ANON - Kea on November 28, 2014
    Great story,. Please keep on updating, that end is leaving me hanging,. Thank you,. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2014
    I love this story!! Please please please keep updating!
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  • From bertabee1 on November 03, 2014
    About your comment rape seems logical to you? This hardly fits a S&R love story.
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  • From ANON - AhumbleHalofan on November 01, 2014
    The day I leave my first review is the day you update. Probably coincidence.... Still good update (despite no sex). To me personally I enjoy longer story with detail and descriptions thrown in; about the setting and the characters. Explict sex scenes don't have to be "explict", they can be poetic and descriptive of the act of sex.

    anyway I like your story so far despit the shortness of your chapters.
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  • From ANON - AhumbleHalofan on November 01, 2014
    Believe it or not this is pretty good. I enjoy it but I wouldn't mind seeing...a bit more poetry(?) to the sex. Not just random fucks and pussy. Be more descriptive in the way you write sex.

    As for your characters I hope nothing, truly, barbaric happens to Rin. I hope Mr. S gets that stick out of his ass.
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  • From ANON - Shane on November 01, 2014
    I'm one of the guilty ones who read and disappear...I can't get enough of your writing it's so addicting and so good! Thanks author
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