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Reviews for Take My Breath Away

By : Rukhsana
  • From tgbrunner02 on May 27, 2008
    ohwoweewoweewowwwwww.
    that was one artful piece o' lemon there at the end. gives me ideas, ya know...
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  • From vikikibouki on September 16, 2007
    WELL...NOW! Tell me where I can find that 'rent a muse', 'cause mine's been absent for several months, now. (I'm still trying to figure out how to finish my 'Incense & Mirth' on this site.)

    Seriously, though, this one has become my favorite story from all that you've written (the ones that I've read, anyways!) so far.

    And, seeing as I'm just about the same age as you are, I liked Tom Cruise in that movie, "TOP GUN". My husband, even to this day, can't stand him. He says that he's a hypocrite. Go Figure. I STIIL SAY THAT HE'S JUST JEALOUS!

    Anywhoos...I happened to like that song, (Take My Breath Away) too, and truly found that it played out perfectly with where you wanted to take this story.

    Very well written, although there were many spelling errors. But I kinda chalked that up to where the fingers couldn't keep up with your thoughts. That happens to me sometimes, too.

    On a scale of 1 to 10... I'd have to rate this an 11. That's just how good I personally feel that this story is.

    KUDOS, GIRL.

    Luv ya & leave ya. JA NE.


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  • From ANON - Jen on August 09, 2003
    Personally, I'm glad the bitch muse didn't strike ^__^...I loved this fic, it was very well written and not at all like the many cheesy Kagome/Inu Yasha hentai stories I've rbefobefore. Thanks for writing it! n_n
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  • From ANON - LadySesshou on August 04, 2003
    omg u mst rite more!!11

    *laughs* The ending shocked me...really shocked me, but I liked it ^^
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 04, 2003
    oooh I luved it!!...it was the perfect ending...:-) ty
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  • From ANON - lil weirdo... on August 03, 2003
    wow i really like your fic so far! very realistic and descriptive...keep it up and update soon!
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  • From ANON - LadySesshou on August 03, 2003
    Inuyasha's words...how sad! I guess he was trying to bring Kagome at least a tiny bit of comfort. Kagome's idea about anti-venom is good...I wonder if your muse will allow it to work? My muse has a penchant for killing characters in my fics...yours is unpredictable - which is something I like ^^ I guess I'll just wait and see!
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 03, 2003
    ummmm can i do something to make your muse hyper?? i mean...(sniffles) I NEED to read More!!!...ok ok im compossed...slightly ooh i luve this please update soon really really soon please??? (sniffles and hopes your muse will have pity)..:-)
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 03, 2003
    ooh I luv this!!!!!!...I sooo cant wait for you to update soo please update soon..pretty please??
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  • From ANON - aleaha on August 03, 2003
    what youkie channel....???? ;) ok I know that was a joke at the end...I just thought I would joke back but I'm tired so, so is my joke...waiting for chapter three
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  • From Sei on August 02, 2003
    I like the description in this, as well as the realism of her reaction to seeing him nude. Even though the situation is serious...these thoughts are unstoppable. I can easily picture them together, while she is trying to lower his temperature. Nice work ^^
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  • From ANON - aleaha on August 02, 2003
    I'm sorry to have to be so demanding but you absolutly must update this fic soon...I'm afraid if you don't I might loss my fragile grip on reality I whavehave to be locked away in some local mentle institution. forever mumbling incoherently to myself. I don't think you want that on your consience.

    Ok all kidding aside I don't think I've been left on a cliffhanger so bad in all my readings of inu fics...I'm so happy *see I told you I would lose my grip on reality* I love it can't wait for more
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