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for Kagome's first Kill

by jeffshelton

person Naheta
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really like the way you write your stories. it showes that you have stuied your subjects, as well as putting a new twist in to old stories.

Keep up the good work hehehehe and by the way i cant wate to read more about miroku.


Naheta
person Mija
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I didnt expect you to do this chap..it was totally great I loved it and it makes soo much sense how she could kill later on in your other fic..I liked it ty for putting it up..:-) huggs and smiles Mija..:-)
person Kyoto
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. i am impressed. your stories keep impressing me. you actually tell what is real. your writing is so graphic i can picture the fields of bodies. i am amazed:Kyoto
person stayingput29
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Jeff, I don't know witch I perferr I really liked them both... She comes from a time wear she is weak because she can be... but she is thrown into a time wear the weak really do not survive... So really I think she has to grown up faster in the Fudal Erea then her own... If that makes sence...lol... But I really liked them both and Inuyasha isn't weak because his back ground never let him be.... So there is my opion if it means anything.... Later..... Mules OH Yeah... I really liked this I always love your detail...

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