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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god. poor group of people. LOL. every time i read this my heart aches (in good writer ways). very well done, as always, and very well portrayed. i love this story wtih all of my heart. so well put together. and everytime she gets near INu, i'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see if there is something...anything. but i'm never let down...it's always so well written. great job and keep it up!!!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No little wolves EVER!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you got that? Hopefully kagome will see a new side to Kouga on this trip and not want to be with him anymore. Her and Inuyasha belong together and NO ONE ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update update update!!!! hurray!! a nothing-happens-here chapter but that's okay. its developing thier characters. what authors note? i didn't see one.
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHH....the angst!!! ::sigh::soooo...sango huh? why do i see blood being spilt? she would be a 'let's get over kag' kick (or not...we'll see) and then she would maim him for thinking that! ::sigh:: i can't wait to se what happens!! still following...and still loving it!!!
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. You've made the whole situation very convoluted and tough to untangle. I'm anxious to see how it goes.
Some punctuation and spelling issues should be resolved, either by you or a beta. For this chapter, I noticed offhand one misuse of an apostrophe ("morning's") and the unfortunate instance of chat/commercial spelling with "thru." Other than that, pretty problem-free. I must commend you on the avoidance of comma splice. That's the end of my nitpicking . . . I just thought you'd like to know.
Keep the chapters coming!
Some punctuation and spelling issues should be resolved, either by you or a beta. For this chapter, I noticed offhand one misuse of an apostrophe ("morning's") and the unfortunate instance of chat/commercial spelling with "thru." Other than that, pretty problem-free. I must commend you on the avoidance of comma splice. That's the end of my nitpicking . . . I just thought you'd like to know.
Keep the chapters coming!
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!! CONTINUE!!!! I really like Inu/Kag but Kouga is soooooo hot too....so hard to choose!!!
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!??!!??! i wait, i look, i search, i ponder whether or not to harrass you to update and THIS TINY CHAPTER is all i get?!?!??!??!?!?!?
come on!! this is one of the greatest and most convoluted ove triangles on this site and all we get to tide us over is THIS!!??!?!??!?!
i sob in despair!!
it was a great chapter, don't get me wonrg. but it was so short and i pine for more!!!! update sooner!!
come on!! this is one of the greatest and most convoluted ove triangles on this site and all we get to tide us over is THIS!!??!?!??!?!
i sob in despair!!
it was a great chapter, don't get me wonrg. but it was so short and i pine for more!!!! update sooner!!
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, when I first started reading the story, I wasn't sure if I was gonna like it becasue there are few fics i like which are set in the present, however, as I kept reading I found myself wishing you would update sooner!!! hint hint :::wink::: Anyway, I think the story is very original and VERY angsty... which is a good thing, ne? And I think it is one of the most intriguing love triangles, and I can't wait to see how you resovle it! Very good job!
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you are making Kagome feel indecisive of what she wants to do.
I hope she ends up with Inuyasha though.
I hope she ends up with Inuyasha though.
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't like the Kouga Kagome stuff. but this is a good story. Please let something happen between Inuyasha and Kagome soon. Not just a dream lemon, something real. Those two belong together. Please let Inuyasha and Kagome be togteher in the end or i will be haunted by any K/K lemons you put in this fic.