rate_review Reviews

So far I absolutely love the story! You must add more chapters! As for a title to the fic Disapperance is one. Or Kidnapped. Or A Fathers Revenge, since I'm sure he'll try to kill Naraku for this. Or Two Lost Loves meaning of course the loss of Kagome and his daughter. Anyways I wanted to give you a few good idea's for story titles. I hope they help! :)

keep going it's good

You have this in the wrong catagory! You should move this to Inu Yasha instead of angst. It is the makings of a very good story, I would be interested to read more.