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by Riomi

person LcT
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
emm..i have no idea what rin picked up ... >< ...ehhe..lol but i do enjoy the fic !! hehe, i have to keep reading to find out i guess & i have to agree that sessru iru is a difficult to read ...anyways, love you fic
person LcT
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oops..that face i attempted to make cut off the rest of my comment, well, what i wanted to say was that i really enjoy it, continue it !
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person lover16
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha im back! hurry up w/ da chapters please.^_^. it is fun fun. and i wanted to ask u , how do u recomend stories on this site? i cant figure it out . call me stupied chi!sorry i just got done watching chibots, good show that. opps im getting off track. oh, by the way have u ever comsider writing a fruits basket fic?! i think it would be really good.well good job , and keep up the good work!bye bye .

~*~amanda~*~
person amanda
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
u r such a god writer please hurry up with the next chapters, i hate reading and i love ur fic , soase ase dont take delay, the suspense is killing me!!!i cant wait until the next chapters, its such a good story!

but not to offenses or anything, but may i suggest checking ur spelling, it may b from typing so fast that u type the wrong key , but reviewing it wouldnt hurt. but other than that ur doing a awsome job, so please hurry!!!

thanx, ill review later.bye

amanda (smiles)
person Rasberries
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Like the latest chappie! His servants sound so exotic, sad, sorrowful, but exotic. Sesshomaru seems a bit malicious, ne?
Ya got me erinering what he is going to do to the poor girl in his bedchambers. Kagome is getting stronger. Like seeing
that. I am anxious how your are going to get Sesshomaru to bend for this to become a Sess/Kag. fic. It is a Sess/Kag right?
I am not too big on that pairing but I still like this story so keep it up. Will await the next update. Ras.
person Lady Knightstar
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice. I lost track of it for a little pit. but it came along quite nicely. I really am interested in finding out where you are going to have sto story go.
person jessa
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
pretty good so far
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I liked this chapter very much! Finally, Kagome's gettin some real defiance to her. I can tell she is trying to be strong now. Because Inu told her to live. Sesshomaru is very in character, so in character I can't believe that he will change from it,
if that is what you planned that is. If you are going to make this a Kag/Sess fic I can't see the attraction between the two yet. If you are going to take your time with that it's all the better. I am going update soon. as soon as my beta sends me her edits. Great chapter! Ras.
person snowcat
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MMMUUWWAAH**blows kiss** Your so nice to address your reviewers! Oooo...Sessh got thrown against a wall and thought it "fun"? watchout Kagome, you might ignite the wrong reaction, eh. (Grammar Critique)I may be wrong, but in the line... "I know(should be past "knew")that I shouldn't have said it, but I don't (should be past "didn't") regret it." It just seems to work better in past tense. Thanks for the chptr. And yeah I'll try email, tho I'm having a second line put in this week so be patient K?

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