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by Riomi

person nightmareofcat
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love it please update soon
person GreaterBeast_Xellas
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Intersting,I bet I know what Rin picked up, the rosery. update soon.
person Mija
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I like this story sooooooo much, I think I read the first chap on MM but I like reading them here more..I think the chap with Sesshy's thoughts was soo good, it is dark and I wants to cry that my Inu is dead..and m whm what Rin picked up...hoping its Inu's bead necklace, the subduing one, and I hope when Kagome finds it she puts it on Sess and makes him sit..hehe that would be sooooo cool..anyway cant wait till your next chap..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Mija
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lmaooo ok i was mistaken, I re read the reviews and apperantly I first read it here..lol..my mind is not quite right, right now, head cold and all, no excuse I know since Im like that always..anyhow great story..huggles Mija
person Mija
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg are you kidding?? should you continue??? heck ya!!!!!!!...ok ok Im calm...this is good, very dark and totally interesting, great start I soooo cant wait to read more soo please continue ok?? pretty please??? will share my cookies wif ya??? hehe huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Pallas
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this one very much! Lots of angst possible! Please update soon!
person veggie
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you must continue this i have to find out what happens
i thought it was very well written except with a few very few spelling errors here and there but none the less you did a good job hope you continue it
veggie
person Queen of the storms
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue the fic. Cause I don't think it should end there. Well anyway thats my thoughts not yours, but please do continue it!
person lil ol\' me
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the slow flow, the dramatics it causes. You must be talented or be enrolled in a very good class. Keep it up!
person Kagome
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
keep going.....I like that you didn't do too much, give too much away. It is dark, bit gppd. Keep up the good work!

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