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for Torn

by Riomi

person Lady Knightstar
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Please continue on. I would love to see what else is going to happen.
person tc
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i seen those squares in other storys what are they???
person Crash, a.k.a. broken_angel
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Well, not exactly "nice", but good. I like it. I really hope you continue to write this fic. It has promise. I did spot a few grammar/spelling/typo errors. Not a lot, just a couple.
Later - Crash
person Fuzzy
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....................RAWRRR COME ON WHY DID YOU HAVE TO STOP ON THE GOOD PART >_<
*whines*
person deniki
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good!!!! Please continue, if not for the no reviewers but for me!!! :)
person Lacy
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
interesting, is it the start or a one shot? If it's just a start it has a TON of potential, if its ja ona one shot then......

HOW DARE YOU LEAVE US HANGING?!?!?!? DOES HE KILL HER OR NOT?!?!?

I want to KNOWWWWWWW e-mail me!
person Juri
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Continue please! I'm curious to read what Sesshoumaru has in store for Kagome (Like we don't know)! Good chapter.
person faith
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm only going to say one thing...please give us another chapter this looks very promising.

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