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for Seeking the Hime's Heart

by EvilNekoEatsYourSoul

person KagoKitty
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, giving little glances in the dining room now, are we?? ooh, its okay if you don't update like, really fast, because i'm about the same as you...SLOW. lol...i'm enjoying this and i really like the portrayals of inu and sesshy. i REALLY love how this isn't a giddy happy story, it'll have to build up slowly, which is fine by me...a love angtsy stuff like this, it usually turns out sad but beautiful, ne??
hope you update soon!!
=^-.~^=
person Rasberries
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always your writing is such a wonderful pleasure to read. It flows beautifully yet....simply.s chs chapter appeased my wait and I shall wait on the next one. Kagome's plight seems so real to me. The way you describe her inner turmoil is perfection in it's own right. I can almost feel Kagome's heartache and her need to just be with her daughter. I see how you gave Kagome and Inuyasha a *common ground* type situation. It makes me all the monxionxious about their upcoming relationship. Please take your time in that relationship. I am severly enjoying the pace you have set. You don't have to speed it up. On that note your timing and flow of the story is perfect as well, intriging and brilliantly written with just enough
hints in just the right places to leave the reader patiently craving the next installment. Hope you keep writing this sweet, sade romantic tale. Ras~~~~~~~~
person Rasberries
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always your writing is such a wonderful pleasure to read. It flows beautifully yet....simply. This chapter appeased my wait and I shall wait on the next one. Kagome's plight seems so real to me. The way you describe her inner turmoil is perfection in it's own right. I can almost feel Kagome's heartache and her need to just be with her daughter. I see how you gave Kagome and Inuyasha a *common ground* type situation. It makes me all the more anxious about their upcoming relationship. Please take your time in that relationship. I am severly enjoying the pace you have set. You don't have to speed it up. On that note your timing and flow of the story is perfect as well, intriging and brilliantly written with just enough
hints in just the right places to leave the reader patiently craving the next installment. Hope you keep writing this sweet, sad romantic tale. Ras~~~~~~~~
person Kawool
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo you updated !!! happy dance !!!
This story is so great i cant wait till next update !!!
huggles
kawool
person kari
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy that i saw u updated :), this is one of my fave stories just cause it's different and exciting. I think u do a great job at writing and i hope u get to update soon.
person New Fan
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What does Naraku wants with Kagome. Does he really want to start a war
between himself and Kouga. Does he want Kagome (even though he did not
see her as very pretty)? I think Kagome beauty will show though once she is
truely happy with her life. When when she going to be 'closer' with Inuyasha. Update soon.
person youkai tsuki
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Although it takes you a while to update,
it is always worth it. I can tell you don't rush through your writing,
your grammar and spelling is usually on the mark. l sel see you next
update.



youkai tsuki
person janice
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so good, i cant wait to read more. keep it up
person yg
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uyt
person ?
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pleaz bring out the next chapter now, i want to know wut happened!!!

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