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for A Bet With In A Deal

by peachgirl21

schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your story is awesome and hilarious
person Sareanna
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful. simply wonderful. keep up the great work.
person BRITTNAE
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW USUALLY WHEN A AUTHOR STARTS TO WRITE A STORY AND I READ IT AND SEE THAT IT ISNT FINISHED I DELETE BUT THIS WAS SOOOO GOOD THAT I HAD TO FAVORITE IT AND WAIT UNTIL U PUT ANOTHER CHAP UP PLEASE IM BEGGING U I WILL DO ANYTHING FOR ANOTHER CHAP I AM GOING TO START REVIEWING EVERYDAY UNTIL U PUT ANOTHER CHAP UP SO PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW U LEFT ME ON A CLIFFIE AND IM DIEING TO SEE WHATS NEXT AND HOW KOUGA REACTS TO INUYASHA AND KAGOME'S SULTRY DANCE ONCE AGAIN I REALLY ENJOYED UR STORY PLEASE REVIEW PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



PLEASE REVIEW ( UR # 1 FAN )
*~* BRITTNAE*~*
person mary
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow i've never read such a passionate story if u have a chance could u send me more of ur fan fic?
person Kari
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow very awesome story so far, loved them lemons, but i gotta know who's baby it was that Kikyou was caring? was it InuYasha or someone elses? i hope u are still out there and will update soon i gotta know if InuYasha and Kagome will tell eachother their real feelings and be a real couple. please update soon!
person hurry
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh i need a shower please update when i come back from my ice cold shower. i will be in there for a long time as steamy as that was but don't stop with the lemons i don't mind taking a ice cold long bath as long as i get my lemons damnit please hurry and update i like where this is going.
person Nino
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update your story soon with more lemony goodness .
person wowwww
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow I need a shower. update as fast as you can I can't wait for the next fic i love it.oh and feel free to add in as much lemon as you can. please more lemon
person sara
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was very good please update
person Ashes
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I'm definatly intreagued! (sp?) I love your Kagome already and I only just read the first chapter. *looks at watch* Meh. I don't have class tomorrow. I'll go read the rest now! Definatly an author after my own heart! If it was to humiliate someone I really and truely despises, i'd go along with inuyasha's little plan. a little hurt pride never killed anyone. plus, as an added bonus, i'd get to make out with a really hot guy!!! i'll tell you what i *really* think after i've finished the fic!
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