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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no no have kogoma chose not to be a vanpire ok ok ok ok please plase please please!!!!!!!!!!! ok well please im me at MiNNILaBaBii3396 or HoneyCakes3296 . okies well don't let kogoma be a vanpire please!!!! im me
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, as i had asked this question to you :P. i think she should stay vampire... because if gets to bad couldnt she just destroy it anytime??
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DESTROY THE CURSE!!!! DESTROY THE CURSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey another awesome chapter my freind, i was just curiouskagokagome ever gonna change back to a human???
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a neat idea, but in chapter 34 I would haatheather read what they spoke about rather than wor words "they talk." There emotional relationship and communtication should be developed.. Unless this is justna bna be a quick roll in the hay and when they're free they go on their merry ways. To me it seems that now it's just a count down to the lemon, which is a shame to what is supposed to be a plot, rather than hentai driven story. Okay, you've heard this already but I'll add my comment your verb tenses and spelling are bad. It's nothing a good beta can't fix. You switch from past to present often and without warning. Things like that cause stories to lose their apprathrather quickly.
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You still need a beta to catch those spelling errors, but I'm enjoying the story anyway! There is a vampire series where Dracula took power in England in the Victorian era, Anno Dracula, which might interest you even though it's different than the set up you're using. I actually prefer the sequel The Bloody Red Baron even if it doesn't have Dracula in it.
I don't think Kagome is being easy...personally, I think she's showing amazing restraint! I'm hoping that your final pairing is Sess/Kagome. I do like how you've made him fall in love with her but remain prickly and proud and prone to temper. I can never see why writers feel the need to change a good snarky bad boy into a love besotted wimp. If that's what they wanted, why not use a character that's more like that to begin with, like Hojo? They only like Sess's good looks, but can't deal with the whole demon-aspect. I'm looking forward to the true lemon after this long wait... ;)
I don't think Kagome is being easy...personally, I think she's showing amazing restraint! I'm hoping that your final pairing is Sess/Kagome. I do like how you've made him fall in love with her but remain prickly and proud and prone to temper. I can never see why writers feel the need to change a good snarky bad boy into a love besotted wimp. If that's what they wanted, why not use a character that's more like that to begin with, like Hojo? They only like Sess's good looks, but can't deal with the whole demon-aspect. I'm looking forward to the true lemon after this long wait... ;)
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best stories i have ever had the privaledge to read it is number one on my top ten list ^_*
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the story ^_^
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i am totally addicted, i read all and try to update asap! I luv it!!