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by DelKaidin

person MOFAF1
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story...keep it up
person Stefanie
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You made me cry! I'm as much in love with my husband as I was when I first met him, and your story somehow hit a nerve with me. I couldnt imgaine losing my husband, (even though Inuyasha and Kagome werent married). And I also have a son. Just the overwhelming love that hits once your child is born is amazing. I guess your story hit me a bit harder then I expected. :) I totally love this story! Its so sad and yet the fact that you had Inuyasha spend those 3 days with Kagome was wonderful. I do hope there is gonna be more, but I really dont know where you would take the story line. Anyways, if you figure out something or if you have something planned, please continue soon. I so enjoy your stories. And please update some of your other ones as well. :)
person yasmin
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was beautiful , is this the end? is this a one shot? tell me please!!!!! are you going to add more chapters?
person ME
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if there's going to be more--I liked it, even if it was extremely sad--but I hope you continue and somehow Inu and Kag can be together--I don't care how 'honorable' Inu is, he still shouldn't leave Kagome!! ^_^ *sob* anyway......update soon??
person mofaf1
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the fic...hope to see more soon
person Tears
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
noo... please please pleeeeaseeee don't leave it there!!!! i am begging you! Inuyasha has to come back!!!! he just has to..... please update soon.
person Naheta
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow ummm Wow. i love it Del.

is there going to be any more to the story??

Naheta
person Mija
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omggggg you had me crying...this was soooooo sad and soooooooo sweet...was it a one shot??? awww please tell me theres more...but then again without Inu there it might be best to leave it there at a bitter sweet ending...oooh im soooooo pulled...I want more then I dont cause I know Inu is dead....whaaaaaaah sniffles sobs..again fantiastic chap gf I loved it..much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person KagoKitty
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it...I actually started crying reading this. It really shows the love and confusion they all must feel. Their last minutes together had me dropping tears with Sango. Oh Kami, I love it!! The baby has his ears...so adorable...I can almost see him!! *sniff* I REALLY need a Kleenex...such a good job, chica!!!
=^-.~^=
person quirkyslayer
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. Very well written.

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