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schedule
January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you seem to have forgotten many of the punctuation rules, otherwise well written, though very short. i cont complain, mine are short too.^^
schedule
January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just read the second chapter and i found it quite confusing as to when they were talking...hmmm
schedule
January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really going to like this!