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by DelKaidin

person AleGnA
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool! That was a good chapter! Liked the sex slave comment. That was funny. He sure told them. Hags... Write more soon!
person Anya3
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Short and sweet - love the story, love the kid, keep it up!
person Soranji
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dies at the sex slave comment*
person Suzuko
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like What Inuyasha said at the end of that and both Yuka and Eri got what they deserved I love this story so write more soon and Keep up the good work.
person kenshinsplaything
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thins is the sweetest story i have ever read....oh.and the last line "and willing sex slave" was the best..rock on and keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person AleGnA
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um, there's a mix up in your chapters. One Hundred and Eight was put on twice instead of the next chapter you had put up. Might I say though, this story is really good and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
person HAP
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
w00t, go Inu yasha, what a way to tell those two off! hehe willing sex slave, i love it, update soon! ^_~
person New Fan
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You said it in you last sentence "and her willing sex slave" now you
have to back that up. Update soon. ^__^
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wng sng sex slave?!?! hell yea, go Inu-baby! lol, I can't believe Kagome's old friends... what complete bitches! I'm so pleased she didn't take their shit, and poor Kenmaru--! I love the little guy, and so does Inuyasha, and i loved the beginning "I want you to be my Daddy" OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH how adorable is that?! Continue soon!

angie
person Mija
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omggggg they made Kenny cry...bad withces bad witches..I never did like Kagomes friends..grrrrrrrrr but yay Inu to the rescue adn omg willing sex slave??? damn that was priceless Del gf I loved it soo cant wait for more ya know I love this fic to death..hehe and again conradulations on your nomination you soooooo deserve it...:-) talk to you soon I hope huggles and smiles and luvs your fan and friend Mija..:-)

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