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by DelKaidin

person your so cool
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ingenous *I can't spell* that is a perfectly wonderful tool to help in writing...its funny though I often wish I was a better artist because I tend to want to draw after I read a good fic...I can't wait for the next chapter. This story has absolutly stolen my heart.
person Khellendros
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Del...what can I say? That was an awesome chappie! Loved Kagome's little slip when she was arguing with Inu...silly boy,he should learn to listen better...and those rotten kids teasing Keni like that...shame on them.
Great story,I am thoroughly enjoying it.

See you next update,Huggles
Khell
person yasmin
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im sooooooooooooo glad you had decided to continue the one shot story , this story is so emotinal!! cant wait for the next chapter !
person Kaye
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why must they always pick on the little kid?! Poor baby. The outfits looked very good. Keep it up!
person New Fan
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor baby, he had to go through what other children who looks different goes through. Inuyasha should have taugh those kids a lesson about not to tease people who are younger or looks different than them. I love the chapter. Update soon.
person Mija
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh that was soooooooo good Del a nother wonderfu Chal girl I loved it..and poor Kenmaru..sniffles for the poor thing mean kids...and omg...you know Inu's going to remember what Kagome let slip later on, will she tell him?? its about time I think he should be told..anyhow update soon please??? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person KagoKitty
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice, dell...and i like the fashions too, believe it or not!!! Ya knoe me...all i want you to do now is UPDATE SOON!!
Ja ne, chica,
=^-.~^=
person Babsie
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are good...and you are mading me suffer here...
Now I don´t know if I want that Inuyasha remember his past life with Kagome or don´t and you will write endless...
Very sweet chapter
Please, update soon
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the latest chap very much. I like how Inuyasha is noticing Kagome. And the slip up was just too good. I know Inuyasha had to have noticed what she said. I also like the clothing descriptions. Makes for good visualization. Story is coming along great.

Ras~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
person Kawool
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo ! Review #100 Dell
Happy dance
As always i luv it !
Keep up the good work
Kawool

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