rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

sorry dont have an e-mail.ill get one soon.Your first chapter was good.It did sound like Kagome was being bossy to her mom though.

i am sorry the 1st chapter made me go on and i read the other 2 chatpers and i think you were going WAY to fast.if i just saw my friend transform into a deamon i wouldnt be all cool like it was natural and say ok lets fight,,sorry i think you need to add more detail.When you write the reader should be able to see what is happening..all i am getting from this is pictures,,like this happened then that instead of it flowing together.Work harder =)

More now or i will come to your hose and rip your sole from your body, i want more because it's goo *hands you a cookie* it's not possined....................................maybe, MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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awwwwwwwwwwwww, good first story. I'm gonna be reading this one for a bit.

I like your story so far.It's very interesting.Looking foward to the next chapter!