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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oops! I was refering to at the end of Chapt 12! (sorry, forgot to write that's where I am in my "re-reading" pleasure.
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 was one wonderful piece of erotica--sexy, sensual and (because of the adultery factor) sinful. Keep it up!
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK OK i WON'T EAT YOU GUYS. HMM i WAS ACTUALLY WONDERING ITF MAKE THEM HAVE SEX WHILE HE BECAME A YOUKAI AGAIN. UPDATE SOON.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheering Tsuki..*
Yay - make her work!!!!
And Alijandrah - you get a huge KRAM (=hug in swedish) from this little twisted girl for your work...
:o)
Yay - make her work!!!!
And Alijandrah - you get a huge KRAM (=hug in swedish) from this little twisted girl for your work...
:o)
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know you probably want something more then this, but after reading Chapter 19 and 20, All I can say is... WOW! That was so hot I can't even think straight enough to give a proper review.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad that you are back and that your surgery went well. This was one of the best, if not the best Sango/Inuyasha lemons I have read on this site. You Go Girl!!
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like your writing . I can't help wondering though if you realize that most cheating by husbands is done while the wife is pregnant or ill. Talk about kicking a person when they are down.
Now I was lucky and have a husband who was the product of major and blatent infedelties on his father's part, he can't stand the idea and told me when he was being appproached by women while I was pregnant. He's very good-looking so it's no big shock.
I was appalled by the blatent displays they would put on in my face thinking I didn't count because I was pregnant and soon to deliver. Don't worry, they didn't bother him for long. I set the old ladies at his work lose on the girls. That worked where nothing I could have done would!
Although I like your writing I cannot like your subject. Noble House -my left foot. Noble is you don't hurt your spouse. And, dear, the way you've set it up he's lying, cheating and all because Kags is preggers. Nice.
Now I was lucky and have a husband who was the product of major and blatent infedelties on his father's part, he can't stand the idea and told me when he was being appproached by women while I was pregnant. He's very good-looking so it's no big shock.
I was appalled by the blatent displays they would put on in my face thinking I didn't count because I was pregnant and soon to deliver. Don't worry, they didn't bother him for long. I set the old ladies at his work lose on the girls. That worked where nothing I could have done would!
Although I like your writing I cannot like your subject. Noble House -my left foot. Noble is you don't hurt your spouse. And, dear, the way you've set it up he's lying, cheating and all because Kags is preggers. Nice.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good. Just let them wake up first before Kagome returns. Semper Fidelis
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is the spelling acceptable? Is the format readable? Is the story coherent? Your story passes all three of these questions so I advise you to not even listen to people who say the story is bad because they don't like the plot, setting, or circumstances. I am not a writer but I believe the writer should write for themselves and not their readers, having a fanbase is just a bonus. I happen to enjoy this story and hope you continue it.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tell it lit iit is. I happen to like Jeffs storys too. Plus what he describes in his spinoffs also existed in European families until the invention of the fireplace heated homes considerable enough so family members could sleep in different rooms. Urrah Semper Fidelis.