rate_review Reviews

I love this story. Sesshy is so sweet helping Inuyasha. Inuyasha is so helpless right now. I always enjoy seeing fics where Sesshy gets a heart. Please update quickly. I do wish that the whole gang hadn't been killed, but oh well.

Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon

EEEE! You updated! Yay! Good work!

I love when Sess comes to the rescue of his little brother. Poor Inuyasha. He's in bad shape. Can Sesshy make it all better with a little tender, loving care. I think so. Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter. But keep studying. That does come first.

Please do update! Update! Update update! Or I will have to cry! ::sniff::

Please update soon. I can't wait for Sess to kick Naraku's ass and save his little brother. Poor Inuyasha. But I bet his brother will make him feel all better.

o0o!!! This rocks!!! I really really like it!!!!! ^^!!! Write more!!!! Now! I beg of you!!!!!! :-D!!!!!!!!!!!

You MUST review!!! this is a really good fanfic. So plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplplzpplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz review!!!!!

Myaaagh! How could you just leave it there? I want to see more! Do you know how long it took me to find Inuyasha yaoi on this site? UPDATE!! Oh, and awesome job too, by the by. ^^

I have to say that this story has great potential. The ideas in here are wonderful and the descriptions are outstanding. However, I have found that you need a bit of work in the technical aspects of writing i.e. the tenses(past, present, future) sentence structure, and the like. All that you would need to do is get a beta reader. I believe that if you get a beta this would be an outstanding piece of work.
I would be willing to beta for you if you would like. E-mail me if you wish and I would be more then happy to help you with this.
Please don't take this as a flame as it is not meant to be one. Keep up the good work!
~Tears