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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story so far, i hope you update it soon.
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like your story up to ch2 that was a cop out with the spell
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn this is gonna be one hell of a marriage
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fluffy and Rin?! I never would have thought. This is getting very interesting. Hope you update soon!!
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Update soon. Can't wait to read how Sesshomaur explains to Rin what she wants to know.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Have you ever even HAD sex? I mean, really...? Cus these lemons are some of the worst I've read. Perhaps with a bit of research, such as... http://www.soc.ucsb.edu/ or... I dunno, actually fucking? Constructive criticism isn't what it should be these days...
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! THAT IS ONE OF THE BEST FAN FICS IVE READ SO FAR!!! you get a 10.5 out of 10 in my point of veiw...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! and if its not to big of a problem, could u e-mail me when you update?
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your storey so far!! lol i'm only on chappie 2 tho (yeah i don't have much time! ~cries~) but i love it!! OOONE problem tho, you keep saying "inu-yasha frequently saw kikyou anymore" frequently is the opposite of rarely! and i think u mean rarely, since 'frequently', is contradicting your sentances!! just thought id tell you since i LOVE your story and i just want it to rock everyone's socks (since it already rox mine!) XD
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. No, I love it! i don't mean to sound stupid, but u better keep writing, and hopefully, you'll update this too. Really really good story. I'd recomend it to anyone! (at the right age of course!) and you should make a Lemon/lime in one of the next chapters.
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! great story. you are a great author for 16. keep op the good work!! and since the story is so good i wont get on you about all those spelling errors. well keep the reviews coming.
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