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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a twist! It's great! I also really like like your style, I hope your write another fic soon! This story seems to be completed on it's own, I mean, we all know what's going to happen, Inu's ashamed, Kagome's ticked, Miroku's REALLY ticked,Naraku will used their anger against each others, etc., etc. (Don't think I'm saying your story sucked or something, it doesn't. I just think it's fine as it is and completed). Hope you write more soon!
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
saw it coming im a San/Inu fan so you got my respect love to see more from you
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I had to admit...this fic really caught me off gaurd! I like the way you formed it! Good going! ::is still smiling from the way the chapter turned out::
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow i didn't see thst coming when you sadi "stroking kirar" i thought thatw as sango please update soon
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay. So, where is the next chapter?!
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I actually didn't see it coming. I'm glad this didn't turn into a romance. Rape romances make me ill. I think Sango's reaction is good and very realistic. And jodibetz rape is not romantic or sexy. A man doesn't rape a woman out of love and a woman who is raped doesn't fall in love with her attacker.
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
not bad nice little twist at the end. One thing.... try to keep with the same tense. Meaning you kept jumping from past to present tense and its confusing. Other than that good story update soon.
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(raises hand) I saw that coming...but, i'm a solid inu/kag, sorry. Wanna try one with inu & kag?
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hope to see more soon
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a really interesting fanfic. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon