AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Queen
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for what happened to your comp, hope its fixed soon. Anyways I loved it! All of it! Update as soon as you can. Please.
person Soranji
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow it's been a while since i reviewed. I hope you get your computer problems fixed soon. My computer crashes all the time but we have a back up. Don't worry about it. Everyone will still be here when you return.
person ActinLikeABlonde
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!I love it, and so do my friends [who come over to read it, lmfao, they dont have computers], so the six of them and myself want to say KEEP IT UP!you have a extreme writing talent!
person Tammy
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, No. What is up with Mr Hara's temper? Just a little hot-headed, right? I guess that WOULD get annoying after a while, but I really doubt I would care. After all, what seems to constitute as 'punishment/a solution to any given problem' to Inuyasha always involves long, pants-less disscussions..........anyway! I'm supposed to review, not drool over the thought of an over-sexed Inuyasha.

I really like it, but sometimes I wonder if they are ever going to make it, because he is away so much, and he does seriously have a pem wem with her being close to anyone but him. And she is so damn naive, it is just unreal. I also wonder where Kikyo is going to pop up...I have a difficult itme believing that she just let it go. I know alot of trifle-ing, skank-ass hoes like that, and they are very resiliant beasts. I know she didn't go down like a ham sandwhich or anything.....so where are you stashing her,(Raises eyebrow at author) Eh?

Anyway, it is too fun! I can't wait to see what happens in the NEXT chapter.....such a cliffie....I wonder, whatever does Inuyasha have planned? ^_^

Yay for Maggz!!!
person sabine
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one of the best stories you can find on the internet!...just fantastic and great ...please keep writing....
and by the way I love it when Inuyasha is really really jealous .....
person sabine
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one of the best stories you can find on the internet!...just fantastic and great ...please keep writing....
and by the way I love it when Inuyasha is really really jealous .....and angry...jit is just so sexy
person Mythical Child
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, Inuyasha is HOT when he's pissed! LOL Can't wait to see what ens ens next! =D
person robine
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
U-ROCK-MAN
I-LOVE-THIS-STORY
-Later
person brittney and 6 friends
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!!!
I love the story and me and my 6 friends loved it so much. And can not what for the next chapter...lol....
Well I hope you get you computer fixed. Mine is having a cow to so don't fell so bad well hope you have a good day. And keep up the good work
you are making me and my 6 friends go mad (in a funny way. lol..) to know what is going to happen in the next chapter... WEll we will let you go bye.....

love allway's Brittney and 6 friends.....
person New Fan
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I hope that your comp problem will be solve soon. Please update soon once it has been fix.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?