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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person inusgirl
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
On my GOD!! That was soooooo HOT!! Thanks for the great sex scene between Inu and Kag!! Please update soon!
Inusgirl
person Megan
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome and full of plot twists..please cont it it is the best!
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did InuYasha really plan that? If so, he's a jerk! I'm so happy Kagome's father finally stood up to her mother.
person cancan227
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
They are so sweet together!
person Kaye
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kikyo is jealous, because if Inuyasha is just using Kagome well then he'll have to die. Great chapter, her daddy stood up for him and her! Great story!!!
person shaina
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no, i hope he reasures her of his love before he goes away on tour. That was amazing. Your such a brilliant author. Please continue with the story soon. I love how fast you update this. Thx.
person ladykaa28
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I should have known that Kikyo was going to say something to make what she did look bad. But Kagome does have a point, if she had not given him an ultimatum then maybe he would still be with her. She left with another guy so if any one is the whore it's Kikyo and not Kagome. Her first and only was Inuyasha.
person LadyCatBailey
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*makes evil hissing noises at Kikyou* Stuipd bitch! Stupidddd biiiiiiiiitch! *waves fists* Let me at her, let me at her!...*deep breath* OKay. I'm calm now.

Now who didn't see *that* coming!? She needs her head knocked in. Honest to God, I don't care if my sister *did* do the nono chaha with my exboyfriend right after we broke up, I could never say such cruel things to her. Calling her stupid...Kagome IS the smart one. AND the pretty one. Kikyou's just the evil stuck-up bitch who can't see past her own freaking ego!

Stupid cow. *snarls and maims her* I hate her. I really, realyl hate her.

This fiction is turning out even better then I expected...lemon next chapter? *hopeful look* *Giggle* I'm such a lemon-freak. OH well, I can't help you, your lemons are just damn good.

HOnestly, who wouldn't do ANYTHING for InuYasha taking you against a tree? Whew. WHEW...*fans face* Can't breath. *cough* Okay. I'm okay. *clears throat* Its hot in here.

Can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm really excited to see if Kagome tells InuYasha what Kikyou said...if so...I'm thinking the fur is gonna fly, yaknowwhatImean?

Much Love,
Cat
person Mimiko
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeevil Kikyou! :o I'm assuming you need her for the story, but as soon as that's over...want me to take care of her? I handle everything! Guys that won't pop the question, those pesky people at work stealing your lunch, and I especially love 'dealing' with annoying anime characters. Just call 1-800-SHOOT EM. :D Mimiko and her gun will be there and fix things up! :D


Anyway, enough wishful thinking. Despite its depressingness, I loved this chapter! Kagome's father is finally getting a backbone, eh? Go..Kagome's Dad! w00t. But bad Kikyou! That was just mean.
person Lina
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want more, I love this.

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