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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Kari
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o my gosh is InuYasha just playing w/ Kagome and her feelings? or does he really like her alot? i can't believe Kikyo slapped kagome :(. i gotta know more i hope she questions him about everything she needs too. update again really soon :)
person DelKaidin
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kikyou is such a bitch... she gave the ultimatum.. and lost... and I hope she is wrong about Inu... otherwise what I said in chat... I'm gonna do.... I may let him play with it on alternate Sundays...
person Numisma
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hooray! a perfect mix of drama and, er... everything else! yeah, that's it! hee hee, looks like Inuyasha's getting obsessed w/ Kags ;)
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh god, i suspected as much... poor Kagome, i only hope for her sake its a lie and Kikyou was just being..well Kikyou? I mean, i did say Inuyasha was a little to confident and a little to over bairing like he knew he had to "conquer the virgin" i dunno... i like your Inuyasha is this, but if he is a sleaze i will have to rip my way in to ya story board and cut off something he 'needs' lol, heehee other than that, i love the drama and angst ^.^ continue soon!!
person Kaye
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I noticed you couldn't help yourself since you told us last time that was the end of the lemons. Not that that wasn't a good lemon. It was really hot and they did sorta work things out. I wonder how Kikyo will take this. Great chapter!!!
person Shadiyaray
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another beautiful Chapter. I really love this story. There is just so much drama. My heart was beating rapidly when they got out the car to face her mother and Kikyo.
Great story.
person Mimiko
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs happily* If only they could resolve all their problems like this on the show. I'd be a happy happy girl.
person sweetcandy
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh! i like! please write more soon!
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I would've been scared of InuYasha, too. It would've been kind of y ify if InuYasha said something like "My snake finally has a nice pussy cat to play with." or "I need you, my snake needs your pussy cat."! That would be hilarious! I bet Kikyo will try and get InuYasha back as soon as she sees him. Saying she made a huge mistake, only because she wants to be in the public eye with InuYasha Hara. I can't believe Kagome's mother! She constantly puts her down! I bet she'll be angry with both InuYasha and Kagome, especially Kagome, thinking that she was the one that broke up Kikyo and InuYasha.
person ME
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! no skin off my nose--keep writing those great lemons!! fuck Kikyou!!!!!!.......I mean, not literally......only Inu and Kag....I'm SO hoping this story has a 'happy ending'--I mean those two have just GOT to end up together--all that passion, all that great sex!! I mean, somebody's got to live the dream, right?? am I RIGHT????........I thought so ^_^

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