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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person dragonflyelj
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Maggz,
Whew! that was a hot chappie! Can't wait to read what the next chapter has in store, more lemony goodness? hehe.
person Subaru
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really cool cant wait for next chapter an I am not a hentai i just like in/kag better than sess/kag
person liTtLeKiTtY
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liek your story I hope ther is more it would be funny to see what Kikyo would do. Love you story so much its the best.
person Stefanie
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok...that was a really good lemon. And as for you getting carried away, i wouldnt say that. It was still romantic and not rushed...but you still had Inuyasha say dirty things toward the end, like any man would say LOL. I loved it. Get the next chapter os sos soon as you can. And this time Im not gonna throw stuff at you...you did a good job and I didnt have to wait to long ^_^ Keep up the good work!
person Kaye
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Carried away? You can't get carried away with a Inu/Kag lemon. There is never too much of Inu/Kag lemons! And INuyasha turned naughty in the middle of it! I just have to say this, sexy. Please update soon!!!!
person videl loves goKU
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will review not because you asked...because you deserve to have reviews. You are gifted and I enjoy reading this s so so very much. Great job on this chapter and I do hope you get your target # of reviews so chapter 11 will be out soon. Great job! and Good luck.

~Videl loves goKU
person RedSnow
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I sooo like how yriterite your stories!! I was wondering though, Will you continue your other fic Take Me Home? I really like that one too... Pleeeeeaaaassssseeeee!
person Mimiko
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...I keep trying to write this review, and it keeps getting screwed up because the only words I can say are "Well good freaking WOW. Now THAT was a lemon!" Seriously. Everytime I try to say something else, I think that again. There's gonna be more in the future, ne? *sure hopes so*
person LiTtLe KiTtY
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liek your story and I hope you write more about it. Hurry up and up

L
person ariel
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it keep going don't lev mi hangin please i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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