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for When He Was Mine

by inumag

person Kaye
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I truly wonder how this is going to work out. Usually in these types of stories Kikyo's a little bitch and her's and Inuyasha's is rocky and she hates Kagome. This has thrown me for a loop and amazingly I'm liking it a lot. I wonder when Inuyasha will let on that he has some feelings for Kagome. Good story, really am enjoying it. Can't wait for more!
person GgBg
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so beautiful in its simplicity. It has charm, innuendos, gratuitous cop a fills on Inuyasha’s part and it pulls in the reader with its charm of Kagome and Inuyasha pulling one over on the “Dead Bitch”. Inuyasha is a little (well a lot) OCC in this, he's kinda scary and he gives me the creeps with the "Darling's" the the "Little Sister" comments he uses. It's almost like he's a spaced out hippy wannabe or should I say flower child of the past, or I could go so far as to call him an oily beau hunk (aka known as Rudy from Sixteen Candles) and gratefully head for the hills if he weren’t so sexy in the amine. Please continue with your story, both my friend girl and I love it and we laugh ourselves silly as we both try to picture him this way. Simply Marvelous!!!

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person dragonflyelj
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep going girl, I LOVE this story!
person SUGAR03
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IM GUESSIN HES ALREASY LUSTING A BIT AFTER THE HAIR THING ITS CUTE IT BETTER HAVE A HAPPY ENDING
person liTtLeKiTtY
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story hope you write more! Fast
person fireyfairy
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so interested in where you are taking this story. I love it allready. Please continue your story!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ickabod119
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love the interaction between Inuyasha/Kagome in this chapter Maggz I can't wait until they really start to flirt with each other. I hope you post more of this story soon!!!
person Supercool
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow just found this story and I must it is one of the better written Inuyasha and Kagome stories here. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters and how hot and heavy Kagome & Inuyasha are going to get. Go get him Kag!!!
person Big Bad Wolf
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A hot young Inuyasha as a lead singer in a band would getting me drooling anytime I saw him. I hope Kagome gets a little soon!!!
person TLC
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please post more of this soon!!! I just lovin it like the MCDonalds commerical.

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