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by PharaohsBeloved

person lilladyINUfan
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU SUCK
srry got carried away but ur chapters r extremely short ive read longer MUCH longer.........
i want a new chapter and i want it to be long
person me
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its realy great and dont stop because 1 stupid reviewer
person Hatira-Daughter_of_Water
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good job, i liked it, oh and that reviewer is just jealous that she can't rite like that, LOL, e-mail me when you've updated, bye!

~Let the peacefulness of water be still in your walk in the life ahead...~

~Hªtﮪ-Dªüghtë®_ºf_Wªtë®~
person LcT
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...interesting..
person LcT
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was ok......not as interesting as the 1st, should add more troubles and surprises ^^
person Ceaseless Cloudy Days
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. You are my HERO. This is the best story I've read here, please continue. Your writing is fine, and that flamer can just fuck himself. See ya.
person someone
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I find the chapters far to short. If you are going to update once or twice a month it should be longer. Otherwise I really do like this fic.
person Gothpanther
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, and i was wondering when you were going to update
person HilŨ �
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww I want more
person whitedove
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story please write more bye bye 4 now (^__^)











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