rate_review Reviews

good love story very well written and passionate.
thou it's waist..

nice,nice story. not bad at all

noo!! Cliffy!! EVIL!! post soon please? *puppy dog eyes*

There's nothing wrong with your flow, the story is great! I bet Rin would have died of embarassment if Sess had walked in *blushes* poor girl!

Hi, I really like this story I know where this is leading to a LEMON I hope. I like the way Sesshomaru is in this story and please describe in your next chapter exactly what Rin was doing which I already know. She was masterbating in her bedroom wishing it was Sesshomaru who was touching her. But telling details makes the story much more better. Keep up the good work can't wait to read the next chapter and please update soon. And please make this chapter a real good lemon like I know you can. ok

Personally I think this is a great story so far. Update soon please!!

NO dont stop,more, I demand you write more NOW.

Don't worry about flow just write and the story will take shape.