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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a really cool story. Actually all of your stories are. I was wondering if maybe you could make a sequel to this. Like a lil story about their life after the mating. You know having to face Inuyasha and Sesshomaru and having kids of their own. It should be real cute to see lil So alo all grown up and trying to be a father. ^^ Anyway good story and keep up the good work yea yeah can you respond if you decide to do anything a it. it. Thanks.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written and I like Shippou and kitsune in general And this now is one of my favorites!
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story, though in your conversations, you could use better puncuation. Inclosing spoken words in quotes would be great.
Well, I must say that I am a full supporter of the Shippou/Rin pair and I like your description of Shippou in his adult form. Keep of the great work.
Well, I must say that I am a full supporter of the Shippou/Rin pair and I like your description of Shippou in his adult form. Keep of the great work.
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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was so cute. I wonder what Inu and Sess have to say about their mating. You know tha should be your second chap.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so cute. Lol. I loved. People should make more stories about Shippou as an adult. There si so much potential there. Lol. I have no room to talk since I don't write alot but yeah... ::cough-all-you-other-damn-people-out-there-writing-Inuyasha-stories-cough.:: Yeah well...I'm sure someone will write something this cute and awesome. ::glare at computer screen.::
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi this is Tom. I brought my theater of operations here with my only story at the moment Redemption. As for this it is quite good.
Semper Fidelis
Semper Fidelis
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww...u need to continue this..or something
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*SNIFF* I-I...I LOVED IT!!!! So sweet and omg there is no words to describe it! LOL great job on your fic I think it was great! Ja Ne! ^_^
~*InuyashasGurl008*~
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good. keep going with these alternant pairings.