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I love your story! Fluffy rockes! Update PLEASE!

ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER HUN! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK-SURE HOPE IT ENDS HAPPY AND THEY'VE BEEN THROUGH SOO MUCH NOW. I LUV HOW SESSHOU STILL HAS THAT ATTITUDE-USUALLY ALL WRITERS MAKE HIM ALL SOFTY BUT NOPE NOT U! (I WONDER IF HE'S ALL "I'M YOUR MASTER" IN THE BEDROOM.) lmao oh boy GREAT JOB!

hey! another good chapter. rin's sheath is funky, great descriptions there! i have to say, you totally deserve most read sess/rin fic b/c this fic kicks some serious ass. good job again!

not a disappointment at all!!! that was beautiful! i especially loved the part when he realised that she didnt blame him and it felt as if the pain had been lifted and such. it was wonderful to see the undying faith, loyalty and love they have in one another. rins a great examof eof exceptance. she endures and learns, not playing the blaming game and bitch about it. great stuff, maven! keep up the fabulous work and update soon.

Great story.. i mean i was really touched many times when the story definded "love" tyvm for making such a disclaimer its been so long since iv loved somthing to read i stayed up till 4 am reading all of this so :p thax "theMaven" im going to look for more of ur fics hehe :D and get in trouble for not sleepin...

"thats b/c i am not senile"- BWAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that was one of the freaking GREATEST LINES i have ever read anywhere. just so great. so snide and rude! i was laughing so hard my sister stopped studying for grad school finals to come see what was wrong. great chapter. sess's revelations about his fathers feelings nad his relationship to him was so sweet and made you think about your parents in a more sympathetic light. that whole scene was so well done. the revelation was drawn out and real, if you know what i mean. you got into sess's head and explored his emotions and process of thought. You got INTO him, you revealed a bit of what maked him tick. You really delved into his development as a being.You brought us along the journey of his personal evolution. I absolutely loved it. one of the best sess scenes i've ever read. (oh, and congrats on pulling the wool over everyones eyes. was the third demon ahun?)

yeahhhh, another chapter and just as good as the others. i really like this story and i can't wait for rin and sesshoumaru to be reunited. keep up the good work as always.

If you have 3 to 4 more chapters to write, I hope you have another story in the back of your clever mind.
I enjoyed almost every story you wrote and I believe you have another story in the works it will be just
has good. Update soon.

Very interesting chapter. You're right...I never would have guessed the tree in a million years. I'm not sure what to make of that conversation though. I suppose no matter what the tree-guy tries to tell Sesshomaru he won't give up on Rin...after all, he never goes back on his word right? Can't wait for the update!

As always, excellent, Maven. I don't always get a chance to review, but I love your work. Thank you for another great chapter.