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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just noticed your story and thought I would check and let me say I am not dissappointed at all. you are a great writer and have a wonderful story and the touch of lemon was perfect.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intersting story, I thought it was going to be the same cliched plot but your writing is great I love the way you wrote Sesshomaru.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I can't really give Constructive Cristism because I think you have done an great job on all parts of your story the plot, charactization,and grammar. GREAT JOB.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An update with a lemony goodness to boot thanks for that. now please write more!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for update and the lemon, I am sitting on my chair wondering what will happen next.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intersting find I am enjoying your story I just read all your chapters and I can't wait to read more!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story and awesome lemon.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I gald some people can write on this website and you make a thorughly engaging story, you are a great story teller.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More, More, More, and more!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story you got please update it soon.