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for A Wish Come True

by SesshoumarusMistress

person DPM
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. When is your next update. You're right. This story of yours does have a slightly different twist than the other one.

But I do like the classic "underdog" Rin triumphant over her obstacles to win the heart of a handsome and affluent person like Sess.

WOO HOO !! you go girl. Keep her strong and not wimpy.

Slightly different Sess in that he's more revealing/more free in expressing his emotions without having to pull teeth over it.

person Anon
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story and one that actually had a good plot on AFF that I have read so far. I loved it please continue it has the makings of a star. ^-^* Keep writing you're really good Thanks I enjoyed the read.
person sphinx
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
will ya still be continuin this story...enjoyed it so far, will be a pity to discontinue, so lookin forward to ya next chap!
person C
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I'm loving your story so far and please update soon.
person sesshomaru170
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, really love the little romance thing you have with Sess and Rin. And I like the fact that hes her teacher and shes the student. I really want to find out whats gonna happen since Sesshomaru has givev Rin a ride home. Whats gonna happen next please don't keep us in suspence any longer. I really beginning to look like this @__@ waiting for chapter 4 Please please update please I'm dying to know whats gonna happen. So I can look like this ^___^.
person Mushi
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. I've never sketched Sessh in modern clothes(have a hard time picturing it), so if you don't mind I thought I'd try one(where he turns from chalkboard and looks at Rin). You can check out my other artwork at www.angelfire.com/realm3/youkaiwa before you let me know. Please continue the story!
Mushi
person pinky/inusariel
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More i wamt more please what happens in the car pleaz moorrreee!!!!!!!!
person Shaid
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok so.. a good review...

I did notice the similarities between yours and "In The Classroom," which I am still dying for the end of, but I also saw a lot of differences, the main one being Sessh's character. I like the story so far and I'm interested in seeing where you take this.

Please write more!
person Yogi Mutoh
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Do continue!
person anhimals
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
how can u stop right there?? update soon! =]

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