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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person Sarah
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally was not expecting Kohaku and sess to start laughing. major surprise. I am so excited to see what happens next. Maybe some lemmons (sorry dirty thoughts entering me head.) anyway I loove the way you write and I love this story(and all of the other ones of course)but keep upi the good work and update soon, because I am a loser and a neard and I really want to see what happens.
person ivy
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
as always a great chapter, keep up the good work and as always i remain one of your faithful fans . pls update soon
person animelo
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome writing! Love the story. You keep me coming back for more updates. Love it, Love it, Love it! Keep writing.
person amai sakume
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
these two chapters are great! the last chapter i read, i was listening to Three days grace_ Just like you. and i really really enjoyed the last chpater! any 1 reading this review should trying reading it again with the song playing... oh please update when u get the chance!! :) - amai sakume
person Sarah
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!!! I cant believe sess took that last part so well. I really hope it hurt him like he hurt her . awesoome chapter. that sucks that your not updating on fanfiction any more. Keep up the good work updaupdate soon.
person youkai mistress
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, two more GREAT chapters!! Please keep it up....We all waited so long for these!!!
person ivy
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story , love it , love it . keep up the good work and please update soon
person MC
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! Two chapters! ^^ I kept checking too.

I can't believe Sesshoumaru WHIPPED her! =O Shietz!

I was a bit surprise and furstrated that RIN didn't do anything! I meant like, I expected her to have a good comeback or at least do something or say something hurtful to Sesshoumaru! But she just cried. O_O @^$(#&$ Frustrating. Sigh.

I love love Sesshoumaru, but he's getting me pissed. Haha.

Looking for the new chapter. Hope it won't disappoint. ^^
person gv
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sobs* why!! kill kagura...kill her nice and slow. evil freakin bitch...grrrr
nice work man...i feel like i am gonna cry
person Shadiyaray
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I really really enjoy your stories. There is so much drama and emotion in them.
I can virtually picture everything as if I was watching a movie.
Rin and Sesshomaru are my favorite couple and this is the BEST SESS AND RIN FIC!!

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