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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person faychan
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Maggz!!! It's your girl Feh-yasha here (one of your many chat room hentai girls!). Anyway great fic you have going here. I loved the OCCness of it, very different than the rest of the Rin/Sess fics floating round here. As for the age thing, cause I'm sure you'll get some flames on that *baka people*, its a good age difference, 12 years isn't so bad. Hell my stepmom is 28 and my dad is 44! Now thats an age difference ^__~ I loved the opening scene, really grabs your attention. Can't wait to read more! Talk to you in the chat...*hugs*

faychan (AKA feh-yasha)
person Tasuki\'s Flame
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really like this fic. I hope you update soon. Good job keep it up ^_^
person Kaye
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok... I don't know about other people but I really like this Sessy. It's nice to see him open. I mean I love the stotic, cold, evil Sessy but really, he's sweCan\Can't wait for the next chapter, love it!
person alien_ryoko
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY CHAPPIE #2!! i luv this chappie; though i really wanted t' read wat will happen r ser sess finally gave into his fellings, i was a lil curious 'bout want happened b4 hand. thanx 4 the update!!! keep 'em comein'.
-cha-chan *^___~=v
person shaid
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gotta say I'm liking it, but I have a few questions. Answering them in the story might help it make more sence. Why is Sessh famous? Why was he at the hospital that day?

There are a few other questions, but those are the 2 most important ones and the story will make much more sence once you answe them.

Otherwise, I loved it! Interesting take on Sessh and very interesting take on Rin. Please write more!
person theMaven
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's almost like a role reversal. Sess has Rin's optimism, and she has his stoicism. I like it ^__^
person theMaven
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty darn good. I must say I'm biased, though. Sess and Rin are by FAR my favorite couple--alternate universe, this universe, past, present. It doesn't matter to me. I guess I just like the way they play off each other.
person Kaye
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That cleared a lot of things up. I was wondering what Sesshy really was and like his past and all. Now I understand. Goodond ond chapter, I really like that you are expanding it!
person No One Knows
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! Please tell me theres more!
person inu lover
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was incredible, absolutley incredible...it invoked so much feeling....i fucking love it. i haven't read anything like that ever.....great great work!!!

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