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for It's Something Beautiful

by Asereje

person Anon
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is very sweet and very well written. thanks for sharing it
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that writing was something beautiful. absolutly wonderful grasp on the characters and a great stoping point of bringing readers to (except for those who wish to see the...later...parts. great story and great depictions of them! you did a great job on the story!!
person skittles
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww it was great!
person Numisma
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice, a lot of typos/incirrect grammar, but it's not severe enough to take away from the greatness of this one-shot. also, tell drake220 that he should log in, go to Recommended Stories/Reading or whatever, and enter sto story ID for the story he wants to list in his recommended stories list.
person KagoKitty
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It truly was something beautiful...
GREAT job!!
=^-.~^=
person drake220
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
if i could figure out how to add to recommended reads, i would add this story. i cried. i really did. maybe its b/c i was listening to elton john's 'tiny dancer' which has the sweetest most poignant rythm and instruments or if it was your superior writing, but this fic was beautiful. absolutely a joy to read. you should be very proud that you wrote something this good.
person ... Wow.
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.. I'm in tears.. That was so beautiful! That ... dear god, it was wonderful.. I just can't even speak right now.. Oh dear! There isn't a word to describe that, it was just.. It was just. Yes. I am unable to form words at this point in time due to that. It was so beautiful. I congratulate you, you're awesome.
person Lady Sethia
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was so beautiful!! Hell beautifull is an understatement!! Very very very well written. I absolutely loved it!!

*Wipes the tears from her eyes*

Thank you so much for sharing that with us readers.

Lady Sethia
person RavenShadow
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a really beautiful story. It was a little confusing in the beginning but it came to a wonderful conculsion. I hope to see more work from you in the future.
person stayingput29
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice... for a first inu kag I thought is was very romantic.... well done.... keep up the good work...

Mules

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