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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pleaswe update
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You ever gonna finish this? It would be really nice if you did.
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July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter!!! I can't tell you how happy I am to see an update! Now, I must beg and plead for more!! Great job!!!
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
get yourself back to the damned keyboard and start typing the next chater. and don't stop typing until this story is finished. i'm a woman with an attitude and i'm not afraid to use it!
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update i LOVE this fanfic.
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this fic PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE, IM ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT WAITING.
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love It. But Please Don't Take Another Year to Update. I'M BEGGING YOU I LOVE THIS STORY IT'S AWSOME PLEASE UPDATE SOONER
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the story! What a great way to pass the time on a sick day, heh. So, since I just read the whole thing yesterday, figured I better review, eh?
I think the thing I like about this story the most is the characters. The changes everyone goes through are always within the realm of 'yeah, i could see that happening,' and draw me in more and more so that I am so fascinated as to what will happen and hoping for the best, etc.. i loved how you did the various romantic pairings; I never even thought of Kouga/Kagura before, but it was set up so nicely that it totally works here. Sango and Inuyasha too. In fact, with Sango/Inuyasha, all I could think was, "Wow, they are so completely made for each other, aren't they?"
Great job.
The plot has moved along in such an interesting way, some nice interesting twists here and there, and any OC were quickly fleshed out in a well-written and concise manner.
I had one question: at one point (and this is going to help, oh, not at all as I've forgotten the chapter!) you talk about Kagome's short, green 'fuku,' I'm wondering if you meant gakusei-fuku? Fuku is, like, an outfit or uniform, best I can translate. Gakusei-fuku is the school uniform. (heh, I'm learning japanese and that was a vocab word a few weeks ago, so it stood out ;-) oh, same deal for the term 'younger sister.' If I remember right, it's 'imouto' rather than 'imouta.' Yeah, yeah, nit picky crap that frankly doesn't detract from the story, but I figure I'll mention it in case you ever decide to go back over the story for some reason. Considering most authors I know can't quite leave the story alone and come back to it at sometime or another to fiddle, at least, maybe it'll make a difference sometme, yes?
Oh, let's see, I think my favorite OC are Hideki and Suyo. Oh yeah, I about died laughing with Ginta's reaction to Hideki and Kaede. and I really find that pairing adorable, actually. Just...what a nice thing to do for a character who has always, in the stories, had to devote her whole life to others and taken nothing for herself, really. It just feeds my desire for everything to turn out right and everyone to get what they deserve. Hmmmm, and thinking of older characters and what they deserve, I have a sudden image of Myouga and ...no clue. Sorry, random brain moment that will now be written her forever as I'm too lazy to go back and edit, ha.
Thanks again for writing this and I'll be very, very whinily and impatiently awaiting the next update!!
I think the thing I like about this story the most is the characters. The changes everyone goes through are always within the realm of 'yeah, i could see that happening,' and draw me in more and more so that I am so fascinated as to what will happen and hoping for the best, etc.. i loved how you did the various romantic pairings; I never even thought of Kouga/Kagura before, but it was set up so nicely that it totally works here. Sango and Inuyasha too. In fact, with Sango/Inuyasha, all I could think was, "Wow, they are so completely made for each other, aren't they?"
Great job.
The plot has moved along in such an interesting way, some nice interesting twists here and there, and any OC were quickly fleshed out in a well-written and concise manner.
I had one question: at one point (and this is going to help, oh, not at all as I've forgotten the chapter!) you talk about Kagome's short, green 'fuku,' I'm wondering if you meant gakusei-fuku? Fuku is, like, an outfit or uniform, best I can translate. Gakusei-fuku is the school uniform. (heh, I'm learning japanese and that was a vocab word a few weeks ago, so it stood out ;-) oh, same deal for the term 'younger sister.' If I remember right, it's 'imouto' rather than 'imouta.' Yeah, yeah, nit picky crap that frankly doesn't detract from the story, but I figure I'll mention it in case you ever decide to go back over the story for some reason. Considering most authors I know can't quite leave the story alone and come back to it at sometime or another to fiddle, at least, maybe it'll make a difference sometme, yes?
Oh, let's see, I think my favorite OC are Hideki and Suyo. Oh yeah, I about died laughing with Ginta's reaction to Hideki and Kaede. and I really find that pairing adorable, actually. Just...what a nice thing to do for a character who has always, in the stories, had to devote her whole life to others and taken nothing for herself, really. It just feeds my desire for everything to turn out right and everyone to get what they deserve. Hmmmm, and thinking of older characters and what they deserve, I have a sudden image of Myouga and ...no clue. Sorry, random brain moment that will now be written her forever as I'm too lazy to go back and edit, ha.
Thanks again for writing this and I'll be very, very whinily and impatiently awaiting the next update!!
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG you finally updated! This is my all time most favorite story and I had to wait for a year to see an update. Please dont stop now. Just finish it. Ooh...I'm off to read it^_^